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2015-01-09 · 첨삭 강사 Faye

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Describe the next five years of your life. My next five years is very unpredictable. I will graduate university, and I would be working. I would be have hard time finding a job for me because I am not sure what should I do. But I will find a great job which fit me well, and I will enjoy my work. I might be marry with kind men who do best for me. May be I might have a baby in the next five years, because I want to have baby as soon as I marry.One thing sure is I would be enjoying my life as now.

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Good Morning, [이름]! How are you doing? How\'s life? It\'s been a long time! I hope we could talk again! Take care! -T.Faye   Describe the next five years of your life.>> CORRECT:My next five years is very unpredictable. >>The next five years of my life is very unpredictable.  I will graduate university, and I would be working. >>  I will graduate in the University, and I would be working.  I would be have hard time finding a job for me because I am not sure what should I do. >>  I would have a hard time finding a job for because I am not sure  of what to do.  But I will find a great job which fit me well, and I will enjoy my work. >>  But I will find a great job which fits me well, and I will enjoy my work. I might be marry with kind men who do best for me. >> I might be marrying with a men who does best.  May be I might have a baby in the next five years, because I want to have baby as soon as I marry. >>  Maybe I might have a baby in the next five years, because I want to have baby as soon as I marry. One thing sure is I would be enjoying my life as now. >> One thing I\'m sure is that, I would be enjoying my life.

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