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Describe the next five years of your life.
My next five years is very unpredictable. I will graduate university, and I would be working. I would be have hard time finding a job for me because I am not sure what should I do. But I will find a great job which fit me well, and I will enjoy my work. I might be marry with kind men who do best for me. May be I might have a baby in the next five years, because I want to have baby as soon as I marry.One thing sure is I would be enjoying my life as now.
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Describe the next five years of your life.>> CORRECT:My next five years is very unpredictable.
>>The next five years of my life is very unpredictable.
I will graduate university, and I would be working.
>> I will graduate in the University, and I would be working.
I would be have hard time finding a job for me because I am not sure what should I do.
>> I would have a hard time finding a job for because I am not sure of what to do.
But I will find a great job which fit me well, and I will enjoy my work.
>> But I will find a great job which fits me well, and I will enjoy my work.
I might be marry with kind men who do best for me.
>> I might be marrying with a men who does best.
May be I might have a baby in the next five years, because I want to have baby as soon as I marry.
>> Maybe I might have a baby in the next five years, because I want to have baby as soon as I marry.
One thing sure is I would be enjoying my life as now.
>> One thing I\'m sure is that, I would be enjoying my life.
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