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2015-01-12 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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1.Since he always did well on his English tests, his parents were not surprised that he got an A. 2. You should keep the milk in the refrigerator, so that it doesn't go bad. 3.After he thinks he's smart, he isn't. 4.You should say goodbye to your brother before you leave for Europe. 5.Since my father has high blood pressure, he has to watch what he eats. Friday, I met my old friend after a long time. She was very tall so she looks like older than me. We were awkward first, but soon we talked very fun. I want to meet her again.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, [이름]! Thank you for your composition today! I\'m happy to know that you met your friend after a long time of not seeing each other. You must have had fun. I hope you can meet more often. Take care and have a good day! T. JanE ^^ 1.Since he always did well on his English tests, his parents were not surprised that he got an A.>> Correct 2. You should keep the milk in the refrigerator, so that it doesn\'t go bad.>> Correct 3.After he thinks he\'s smart, he isn\'t.>> _Although_ he thinks he\'s smart, he isn\'t. 4.You should say goodbye to your brother before you leave for Europe.>> Correct 5.Since my father has high blood pressure, he has to watch what he eats.>> Correct Friday, I met my old friend after a long time.>> Last Friday, I met my old friend whom I hadn\'t seend for a long time.  She was very tall so she looks like older than me.>> She is very tall, so she looks older than me.  We were awkward first, but soon we talked very fun.>> We felt awkward at first, but in the end we had so much fun. I want to meet her again. >> Correct

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