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I think that profitable type of business is caterer's shop in korea.
Typical shop is chicken member store.
Because korean likes chicken very much. Especially chicken is loved for total age group people.
Per head chckien consumption is 11.6kg.
Best of delivery food is shskien. ^^
That reason chckien affilated chain number is 40,000 store.
Jessie.
I'm very hungry agin. I want to eat chckien. hehe
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Hello there!
Thanks for sharing this.
I think you are addicted to chicken. You just think about chicken. Hahaha
I\'m kidding. Anyway, thanks for sharing you idea.
Please go over the corrections I wrote.
See you tomorrow!
~T. Jessie~
I think that profitable type of business is caterer\'s shop in korea.
>> I think that a profitable type of business in Korea is catering.
Typical shop is chicken member store.
>> A typical shop is a chicken member store.
Because korean likes chicken very much.
>> Because Koreans like chicken very much.
Especially chicken is loved for total age group people.
>> Most especially that chicken is loved by all age group.
Per head chckien consumption is 11.6kg.
>> Per head chicken consumption is 11.6 kg.
Best of delivery food is shskien. ^^
>> The best delivered food is chicken. ^^
That reason chckien affilated chain number is 40,000 store.
>> Do you mean: Because of that, there are 40,000 chicken stores.
Jessie.
>> Correct!
I\'m very hungry agin.
>> I\'m very hungry again.
I want to eat chckien. hehe
>> I want to eat chicken. hehe
Thanks for sharing this.
I think you are addicted to chicken. You just think about chicken. Hahaha
I\'m kidding. Anyway, thanks for sharing you idea.
Please go over the corrections I wrote.
See you tomorrow!
~T. Jessie~
I think that profitable type of business is caterer\'s shop in korea.
>> I think that a profitable type of business in Korea is catering.
Typical shop is chicken member store.
>> A typical shop is a chicken member store.
Because korean likes chicken very much.
>> Because Koreans like chicken very much.
Especially chicken is loved for total age group people.
>> Most especially that chicken is loved by all age group.
Per head chckien consumption is 11.6kg.
>> Per head chicken consumption is 11.6 kg.
Best of delivery food is shskien. ^^
>> The best delivered food is chicken. ^^
That reason chckien affilated chain number is 40,000 store.
>> Do you mean: Because of that, there are 40,000 chicken stores.
Jessie.
>> Correct!
I\'m very hungry agin.
>> I\'m very hungry again.
I want to eat chckien. hehe
>> I want to eat chicken. hehe
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