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Hello Jenny,
It is true that sometimes we fail but through the process we can learn a lot of things. Same with studying English, we make mistakes but we can still learn from it.
Have a great time in learning English and always enjoy the process.
T. Jeny
Hi jeny~
>>Hi Jeny
thank you for your advice.
>>Thank you for your advice.
I was think about me. I was anxious too much.
>>I think I was too anxious.
I will step by step😄
>>I will do it step by step.
see you tommorow. bye^^
>>See you tomorrow. Bye!!!
What did you gain from an unsuccessful experience?
I took part in a contest 2011.
>>I took part in a concert last 2011.
We are really pratice hard, make it into finals.
>>We really practiced hard and made it to the finals.
finally we fail the contest.
>>Finally, we failed.
I\'m so sad. but I knew that process is more important than the result.
>>I was so sad but I knew that process is more important than the result.
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