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2015-01-16 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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Hello Jessie. I have worry. My boyfriend will go to spain Santiago. Santiago has the way of St.James. He will wallk mountain path toal 800km. Maybe he will lose weight. But I cant't exercise as my boyfriend wallk as hard sports. I will gain weight. bohoo. bohoo.. Anyawy tallk about homework. HaHa. When I a child, my best friend was my sister and brother. As a child, We lived in the country side. So we usually went to the tump. We handpicked raspberries and fed paper to goat.hehe When spring came,many wild flowers bloomed here and there. I ran to the everywhere and eating, playing. Every day I were very happy. I felt that I became like as princess in fairy table. I had not worry, gripe and resentment. We were not lack to life. I really missed that times. Now I had manything. But sometimes I felt futility. I don't know why I feel shortage.

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Hi there [이름]! I think you need to plan your diet now.^_^hahaha I enjoyed reading your composition. You gave a very good description of your childhood. Well, sometimes, I also feel the same way as you do. Like something is missing. But I think that\'s what we have to look for. What might it be? Anyway, let\'s just try to enjoy our lives as much as we can. See you on Monday! ~T. Jessie~ Hello Jessie. >> Correct!I have worry. >> I am worried. My boyfriend will go to spain Santiago. >> My boyfriend will go to Santiago, Spain.Santiago has the way of St.James. >> Do you mean: There is what they call St. James in Santiago. He will wallk mountain path toal 800km. >> He will walk a total of 800 km. Maybe he will lose weight. >> Correct!But I cant\'t exercise as my boyfriend wallk as hard sports. >> Do you mean: But I can\'t exercise while my boyfriend is playing sports. I will gain weight. bohoo. bohoo..>> Correct!Anyawy tallk about homework. HaHa. >> Anyway, let\'s tallk about the homework. HaHa. When I a child, my best friend was my sister and brother. >> When I was a child, my best friends were my sister and brother.As a child, We lived in the country side. >> At that time, we lived in the country side. So we usually went to the tump. >> Correct!We handpicked raspberries and fed paper to goat.hehe >> We handpicked raspberries and fed the goats paper.heheWhen spring came,many wild flowers bloomed here and there.>> Correct! I ran to the everywhere and eating, playing. >> I ran everywhere, ate and play. Every day I were very happy. >> I was happy everyday.I felt that I became like as princess in fairy table. >> I felt that I became like a princess in a fairy table.I had not worry, gripe and resentment. >> I don\'t have any worries, gripe or resentment. We were not lack to life. >> Do you mean: We had everything in life.I really missed that times. >> I really miss those times.Now I had manything. >> Now, I have many things. But sometimes I felt futility. >> But sometimes, I fell futile.I don\'t know why I feel shortage. >> I don\'t know why I feel like I lack something.

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