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2015-01-21 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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Hello Jessie. Today is Tuesday. That means my boyfriend approach to me. HaHa So I have energy. Umm.. What situation can make I cry? I remembered when I cried in the past. Usually I not drop tear. If I feel agony, I run faster and sleep. And I will meet my friend talk about various things. But sometimes I also cried. When I lost my valued friend and family. I think that eternal parting is most sad experience. Sad experience make sensible people. Because we will feel regret.

강사 첨삭

Good morning!
Thanks for sharing this. I am glad that you are energized. ^_^
I hope that your boyfriend will send you messages everyday. ^_^
Anyway, please go over the sentences that I corrected. See you soon!
~T. Jessie~
Hello Jessie.
>> Correct!
Today is Tuesday.
>> Correct!
That means my boyfriend approach to me. HaHa
>> That means my boyfriend approached me. HaHa
OR>> That means my boyfriend contacted me.
So I have energy.
>> Correct!
Umm.. What situation can make I cry?
>> What situation can make me cry?
I remembered when I cried in the past.
>> Correct!
Usually I not drop tear.
>> I usually don\'t drop a tear.
If I feel agony, I run faster and sleep.
>> Correct!
OR>> If I am in pain, I ran fast and then sleep.
And I will meet my friend talk about various things.
>> Correct!
But sometimes I also cried.
>> Correct!
When I lost my valued friend and family.
>> Correct!
I think that eternal parting is most sad experience.
>> I think that eternal parting is the saddest experience.
Sad experience make sensible people.
>> Sad experiences make people sensible.
Because we will feel regret.
>> Correct!
OR>> Because we might regret.

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