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2015-01-22 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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Hello Jessie. I was embarrassed in the morning. My mom asked to me about my boyfriend. I as soon as ended our class. I made a phone call for my mom. As expected my mom asked about his family and he. And she was unsatisfactory. My mom regard boyfriend looks like reserve son-in-law. HaHaHa. Honestly Korea is bad country for disabled people. Korea government support disabled people subsidy. And rehabilitation center for the disabled and school is managed. But A lot of disabled might bear inconveneience. And they is pestered by sympathy gaze or neglect. In case of physical and mental disabilities people, I will suggest to leave Korea. Korea is not friendly to disabled people.

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Good morning [이름]! Really? Hahaha. I was imagining how you look like when you were talking to your mom. I think your mom should have some time to know your boyfriend more. ^_^ Anyway, thanks for sharing your ideas about your homework. See you later! ~T. Jessie~ Hello Jessie. >> Correct!I was embarrassed in the morning. >> Correct!My mom asked to me about my boyfriend. >> My mom asked me about my boyfriend.I as soon as ended our class. >> As soon as we ended our class, I made a phone call to my mom.I made a phone call for my mom. >> As soon as we ended our class, I made a phone call to my mom. OR>> As soon as we ended our class, I called my mom.As expected my mom asked about his family and he. >> As expected my mom asked about his family and him.And she was unsatisfactory. >> And she was unsatisfied. My mom regard boyfriend looks like reserve son-in-law. HaHaHa. >> My mom thinks that my boyfriend looks like a reserved son-in-law. HaHaHa. Honestly Korea is bad country for disabled people. >> Honestly Korea is a bad country for disabled people. Korea government support disabled people subsidy. >> Korea\'s government supports disabled people by giving subsidies.And rehabilitation center for the disabled and school is managed. >> And the rehabilitation center and school for the disabled people are managed.But A lot of disabled might bear inconveneience. >> But a lot of disabled people might bear inconvenience. And they is pestered by sympathy gaze or neglect. >> And they are pestered by sympathyic gaze or neglect.In case of physical and mental disabilities people, I will suggest to leave Korea. >> In case of physically and mentally disabled people, I suggest that they leave Korea.Korea is not friendly to disabled people. >> Correct!

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