Home Work
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello Jessie.
I was embarrassed in the morning.
My mom asked to me about my boyfriend.
I as soon as ended our class.
I made a phone call for my mom.
As expected my mom asked about his family and he.
And she was unsatisfactory. My mom regard boyfriend looks like reserve son-in-law.
HaHaHa.
Honestly Korea is bad country for disabled people.
Korea government support disabled people subsidy.
And rehabilitation center for the disabled and school is managed.
But A lot of disabled might bear inconveneience.
And they is pestered by sympathy gaze or neglect.
In case of physical and mental disabilities people, I will suggest to leave Korea.
Korea is not friendly to disabled people.
강사 첨삭
Good morning [이름]!
Really? Hahaha. I was imagining how you look like when you were talking to your mom.
I think your mom should have some time to know your boyfriend more. ^_^
Anyway, thanks for sharing your ideas about your homework.
See you later!
~T. Jessie~
Hello Jessie.
>> Correct!I was embarrassed in the morning.
>> Correct!My mom asked to me about my boyfriend.
>> My mom asked me about my boyfriend.I as soon as ended our class.
>> As soon as we ended our class, I made a phone call to my mom.I made a phone call for my mom.
>> As soon as we ended our class, I made a phone call to my mom.
OR>> As soon as we ended our class, I called my mom.As expected my mom asked about his family and he.
>> As expected my mom asked about his family and him.And she was unsatisfactory.
>> And she was unsatisfied.
My mom regard boyfriend looks like reserve son-in-law. HaHaHa. >> My mom thinks that my boyfriend looks like a reserved son-in-law. HaHaHa. Honestly Korea is bad country for disabled people.
>> Honestly Korea is a bad country for disabled people. Korea government support disabled people subsidy.
>> Korea\'s government supports disabled people by giving subsidies.And rehabilitation center for the disabled and school is managed.
>> And the rehabilitation center and school for the disabled people are managed.But A lot of disabled might bear inconveneience.
>> But a lot of disabled people might bear inconvenience. And they is pestered by sympathy gaze or neglect.
>> And they are pestered by sympathyic gaze or neglect.In case of physical and mental disabilities people, I will suggest to leave Korea.
>> In case of physically and mentally disabled people, I suggest that they leave Korea.Korea is not friendly to disabled people.
>> Correct!
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