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2015-01-23 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

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Hi Erine^^ It's already mid day. Recently, I have started exercise for my health. I just went gymnasium 2 times. I am feeling muscle pain. But I will go there tomorrow. I will be a healthy women. 1. Jeremy is 10 years old. Jenny is 8 years old. Jeremy is older than Jenny. 2. The Alps are very high. They are the highest mountains in Europe. 3. An ocean is larger than a sea. 4. A Rolls Royce costs a lot of money. A Twingo costs less than a Rolls Royce. A Rolls Royce is more expensive than a Twingo. 5. John's results were bad. Fred's were very poor. Fred's results were worst than John's.

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Hello there, [이름]! I hope you can find time to check the corrections in this homework. See you tomorrow in class. I am looking forward to meeting you again. Take care. ~~Teacher Erine~~Hi Erine^^ >>CorrectIt\'s already mid day. >>Correct Recently, I have started exercise for my health. >>Recently, I have started exercising for my health.I just went gymnasium 2 times. >>I just went to the gymnasium/gym two times.I am feeling muscle pain. >>That\'s why I have muscle pain.But I will go there tomorrow. I will be a healthy women.>>But I will still go there tomorrow. I will be a healthy woman.1. Jeremy is 10 years old. Jenny is 8 years old. Jeremy is older than Jenny. >>Correct2. The Alps are very high. They are the highest mountains in Europe. >>Correct3. An ocean is larger than a sea. >>Correct4. A Rolls Royce costs a lot of money. A Twingo costs less than a Rolls Royce. A Rolls Royce is more expensive than a Twingo. >>Correct5. John\'s results were bad. Fred\'s were very poor. Fred\'s results were worst than John\'s. >>worse than

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