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2015-01-23 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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Hello Jessie^^ I always feel sleepiness in that time. So next weekend, I will go to the internal medicine around my house. And I might check my liver somatic index. I think tiredness comes liver damaged. Anyway tomorrow is happy friday. hehe. Umm... My favorite song is 'life looks like merry-go-round' of "howls moving castle OST" When I was schoolchild, I watched the animation and listened this music. Then I felt that as if I went the fanciful island. This music is made pleased mm. But unfortunately, that animation dilirector declare "Don't make animation." Because his studio suffered many debt. boohoo..

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Hello there! I think you better consult the doctor then [이름]. Tell me about it on Monday. ^_^ Anyway, I will try to listen to your favorite song this weekend. ^_^ See you later!~T. Jessie~ Hello Jessie^^ >> Correct!I always feel sleepiness in that time. >> I always feel sleepy at that time.So next weekend, I will go to the internal medicine around my house. >> So next weekend, I will go to the doctor near my house.And I might check my liver somatic index. >> Correct!I think tiredness comes liver damaged. >> Do you mean: I think tiredness damages the liver. >> Do you mean:  I think a damaged liver causes tiredness.Anyway tomorrow is happy friday. hehe.>> Anyway tomorrow is a happy friday. hehe.Umm... My favorite song is \'life looks like merry-go-round\' of \"howls moving castle OST\" >> My favorite song is  \'Life looks like merry-go-round\' of \"Howls moving castle OST\"When I was schoolchild, I watched the animation and listened this music. >> When I was a student, I watched an animation and I heard this song. Then I felt that as if I went the fanciful island. >> Then I felt like I was in a fanciful island.This music is made pleased mm. >> This music pleases me.But unfortunately, that animation dilirector declare \"Don\'t make animation.\" >> But unfortunately, the animation director declared that he won\'t continue making the animation.Because his studio suffered many debt. boohoo.. >> Because his studio suffered because of many debts. boohoo..

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