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2015-01-23 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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Hello Jessie. Happy Friday. ^^ During six month I am frequenting, Friday is very preciousness. Before when I worked assist writer, I could'nt rest time in weekend and public holiday. Well... These days I want to back to my college days. HaHa. Because in that time everyday was holidays. ^^ I played to my heart's content. hee-hee Anyway If I am animal, I will be a bird. Bird can fly high in the sky and go around in the world. Always I dream about world tour. If people aboard other country, they have to prepare passport, exchange and evaluate entry. But Bird is nothing to do. Wow~

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Good morning! Thanks for writing a composition [이름]. I also want to go back to my high school days.^_^ But it\'s impossible. Let\'s just enjoy every moment of our life. See you on Monday! ~T. Jessie~ Hello Jessie. >> Correct!Happy Friday. ^^ >> Correct!During six month I am frequenting, Friday is very preciousness. >> Do you mean:  For the past six months, I frequently regard Friday as very precious.Before when I worked assist writer, I could\'nt rest time in weekend and public holiday. >> When I worked as an assistant writer, I couldn\'t take a rest on weekends and public holidays.Well... These days I want to back to my college days. HaHa. >> Well, these days I want to go back to my college days. HaHa.Because in that time everyday was holidays. ^^ >> Because at that time, everyday was a holiday. ^^I played to my heart\'s content. hee-hee>> Correct!Anyway If I am animal, I will be a bird. >> Anyway If I were an animal, I would be a bird.Bird can fly high in the sky and go around in the world. >> Birds can fly high in the sky and go around the world.Always I dream about world tour. >> I\'ve always dreamt of having a world tour.If people aboard other country, they have to prepare passport, exchange and evaluate entry. >> If people will go to other countries, they have to prepare their passport,  exchange and evaluate entry.But Bird is nothing to do. Wow~ >> But birds don\'t need to do those things.    

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