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Hello Jessie.
Happy Friday. ^^ During six month I am frequenting, Friday is very preciousness.
Before when I worked assist writer, I could'nt rest time in weekend and public holiday.
Well... These days I want to back to my college days. HaHa.
Because in that time everyday was holidays. ^^
I played to my heart's content. hee-hee
Anyway If I am animal, I will be a bird.
Bird can fly high in the sky and go around in the world.
Always I dream about world tour.
If people aboard other country, they have to prepare passport, exchange and evaluate entry.
But Bird is nothing to do. Wow~
강사 첨삭
Good morning!
Thanks for writing a composition [이름].
I also want to go back to my high school days.^_^
But it\'s impossible. Let\'s just enjoy every moment of our life.
See you on Monday!
~T. Jessie~
Hello Jessie.
>> Correct!Happy Friday. ^^
>> Correct!During six month I am frequenting, Friday is very preciousness.
>> Do you mean: For the past six months, I frequently regard Friday as very precious.Before when I worked assist writer, I could\'nt rest time in weekend and public holiday.
>> When I worked as an assistant writer, I couldn\'t take a rest on weekends and public holidays.Well... These days I want to back to my college days. HaHa.
>> Well, these days I want to go back to my college days. HaHa.Because in that time everyday was holidays. ^^
>> Because at that time, everyday was a holiday. ^^I played to my heart\'s content. hee-hee>> Correct!Anyway If I am animal, I will be a bird.
>> Anyway If I were an animal, I would be a bird.Bird can fly high in the sky and go around in the world.
>> Birds can fly high in the sky and go around the world.Always I dream about world tour.
>> I\'ve always dreamt of having a world tour.If people aboard other country, they have to prepare passport, exchange and evaluate entry.
>> If people will go to other countries, they have to prepare their passport, exchange and evaluate entry.But Bird is nothing to do. Wow~
>> But birds don\'t need to do those things.
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