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I know Korea famous story.
I think that Korean is best famous.
Korean was made of Sejong the Great.
In the past Korean used the Chinese character.
Do you know Chinese character?
It is very difficult.
So many people didn't know language.
Accordingly Sejong decided to make new language.
Many liege man was desperately opposed.
Because language was ownership and power of vested interest.
But Sejong created new language at 1446
New language was called Hunminjeongeum.
These days it is called easly Hangul.
Hangul was only language that progenitor was recorded in history.
And modern researcher can examine fundamental principles.
Korean is still using good language.
It is amazing something.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon!
Thanks for sharing this story.
Now, I know more about your language. ^_^
It really is amazing. Anyway, please go over the corrections.
I\'ll see you tomorrow!
~T. Jessie~
I know Korea famous story.
>> I know a famous story in Korea.I think that Korean is best famous.
>> I think that Korean is the most famous. Korean was made of Sejong the Great.
>> Korean was made by Sejong the Great.In the past Korean used the Chinese character.
>> In the past Korean used Chinese characters.Do you know Chinese character?
>> Do you know any Chinese characters?It is very difficult.
>> Correct!So many people didn\'t know language.>> So many people didn\'t know the language.Accordingly Sejong decided to make new language.
>> Accordingly Sejong decided to make a new language.Many liege man was desperately opposed.
>> Many liege men desperately opposed.Because language was ownership and power of vested interest.
>> Do you mean: Because language ownership gives power and interest.But Sejong created new language at 1446
>> But Sejong created a new language in 1446 .New language was called Hunminjeongeum.
>> The new language was called Hunminjeongeum.These days it is called easly Hangul.>> These days it is called easily as Hangul.Hangul was only language that progenitor was recorded in history.
>> Hangul is the only language that has a recorded progenitor in history.And modern researcher can examine fundamental principles.
>> And modern researchers can examine fundamental principles.Korean is still using good language.
>> Correct!It is amazing something.
>> It is something amazing.
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