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Hello Jessie.
Today is simply Wednesday. haha
I always feel sleepy. Why? Because I'm in my office.
Umm.. I have to fight to nap. I feel very sad. haha
When I suppress fatigue , I just listen music or joyful imagination.
Today homework is little difficult.
I consider that I'm a ordinary person.
Umm...The thing make uniquely to me is book.
Book has many story. If I read a book, I can experience special thing.
New challenge influence unique life.
I hope I will be unique person in the future.^^
강사 첨삭
Good morning!
[이름]! You are unique. You have a specific set of experiences which is different with other people.
So be more confident, okay? Fighting!
See you tomorrow!
~T. Jessie~
Hello Jessie.
>> Correct!Today is simply Wednesday. haha
>> Correct!I always feel sleepy.
>> Correct!
Why?
>> Correct!
Because I\'m in my office.
>> Correct!Umm.. I have to fight to nap.
>> I have to fight the urge to take a nap.
I feel very sad. haha
>> Correct!When I suppress fatigue , I just listen music or joyful imagination.>> When I am suppressing fatigue , I just listen to music or joyfully imagine.Today homework is little difficult.
>> Today\'s homework is a little difficult.I consider that I\'m a ordinary person.
>> I consider that I\'m an ordinary person.Umm...The thing make uniquely to me is book.
>> Umm...The thing that makes me unique is a book. Book has many story.
>> A book has many stories.
If I read a book, I can experience special thing.
>> If I read a book, I can experience some special things.
New challenge influence unique life.
>> New challenges influence a unique life.
I hope I will be unique person in the future.^^
>> I hope that I will be a unique person in the future.^^
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