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2015-02-04 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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Hello Jessie. Today is simply Wednesday. haha I always feel sleepy. Why? Because I'm in my office. Umm.. I have to fight to nap. I feel very sad. haha When I suppress fatigue , I just listen music or joyful imagination. Today homework is little difficult. I consider that I'm a ordinary person. Umm...The thing make uniquely to me is book. Book has many story. If I read a book, I can experience special thing. New challenge influence unique life. I hope I will be unique person in the future.^^

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Good morning! [이름]! You are unique. You have a specific set of experiences which is different with other people. So be more confident, okay? Fighting! See you tomorrow! ~T. Jessie~ Hello Jessie. >> Correct!Today is simply Wednesday. haha >> Correct!I always feel sleepy. >> Correct! Why? >> Correct! Because I\'m in my office. >> Correct!Umm.. I have to fight to nap. >> I have to fight the urge to take a nap. I feel very sad. haha >> Correct!When I suppress fatigue , I just listen music or joyful imagination.>> When I am suppressing fatigue , I just listen to music or joyfully imagine.Today homework is little difficult. >> Today\'s homework is a little difficult.I consider that I\'m a ordinary person. >> I consider that I\'m an ordinary person.Umm...The thing make uniquely to me is book. >> Umm...The thing that makes me unique is a book. Book has many story. >> A book has many stories. If I read a book, I can experience special thing. >> If I read a book, I can experience some special things. New challenge influence unique life. >> New challenges influence a unique life. I hope I will be unique person in the future.^^ >> I hope that I will be a unique person in the future.^^

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