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학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Erine^^
Have you spending your good weekend?
I am working now.^^
"a little knowledge is a dangerous thing."
I agree this sentence.
Because I think that kind of action must make trouble.
If someone who know the something not exactly pretends to know rightly, it is a lie. Lie is always give hurt somebody. And a litte lie is bigger and bigger. Eventually, we can't handle it.
You would rather do not something with a little knowledge than do something.
강사 첨삭
Hello,
Thank you for asking my weekend. I had a great weekend and I hope you spent a great weekend too. I do agree with you on your statement that having a little knowledge is dangerous. There is a proverb that goes \"curiosity killed the cat.\" It would be better to die from curiosity of getting information on something before making a move. On the other hand, it\'s good to also pique your curiosity on something that interests you.
Teacher Erine
Here are my corrections for you:
Have you spending your good weekend?
>> Did you have a good weekend?
>> Have you spent a good weekend?
OR >> How was your weekend?I am working now.^^
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I am at work now.\"a little knowledge is a dangerous thing.\" I agree this sentence.
>> I agree on the statement that goes \"a little knowledge is a dangerous thing.\"Because I think that kind of action must make trouble.
>> I think that kind of action can cause trouble.If someone who know the something not exactly pretends to know rightly, it is a lie.
>> If someone pretends to know something, that\'s exactly a lie.
Lie is always give hurt somebody.
>> Lying always hurts someone\'s feeling.
And a litte lie is bigger and bigger.
>> A small lie can get bigger.
Eventually, we can\'t handle it.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> In the long run, we can\'t handle it.You would rather do not something with a little knowledge than do something.
>> You would rather not do something with a little knowledge than do something that can cause trouble in the end.
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