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2015-02-09 · 첨삭 강사 Sophia

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Hi Erine^^ Have you spending your good weekend? I am working now.^^ "a little knowledge is a dangerous thing." I agree this sentence. Because I think that kind of action must make trouble. If someone who know the something not exactly pretends to know rightly, it is a lie. Lie is always give hurt somebody. And a litte lie is bigger and bigger. Eventually, we can't handle it. You would rather do not something with a little knowledge than do something.

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Hello, Thank you for asking my weekend. I had a great weekend and I hope you spent a great weekend too. I do agree with you on your statement that having a little knowledge is dangerous. There is a proverb that goes \"curiosity killed the cat.\" It would be better to die from curiosity of getting information on something before making a move. On the other hand, it\'s good to also pique your curiosity on something that interests you. Teacher Erine Here are my corrections for you: Have you spending your good weekend? >> Did you have a good weekend? >> Have you spent a good weekend? OR >> How was your weekend?I am working now.^^ >> CORRECT! OR >> I am at work now.\"a little knowledge is a dangerous thing.\" I agree this sentence. >> I agree on the statement that goes \"a little knowledge is a dangerous thing.\"Because I think that kind of action must make trouble. >> I think that kind of action can cause trouble.If someone who know the something not exactly pretends to know rightly, it is a lie. >> If someone pretends to know something, that\'s exactly a lie. Lie is always give hurt somebody. >> Lying always hurts someone\'s feeling. And a litte lie is bigger and bigger. >> A small lie can get bigger. Eventually, we can\'t handle it. >> CORRECT! OR >> In the long run, we can\'t handle it.You would rather do not something with a little knowledge than do something. >> You would rather not do something with a little knowledge than do something that can cause trouble in the end.

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