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2015-02-09 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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What makes your parents special? Hello Jessie^^ We will join until June. After ended our class, I will request little money to mom. HaHaHa.. I have to continue work hard. Because I want to do various things. Umm.. Anyway I hope that I will have beautiful double eyelid. HaHaHa^^ hehe... Let's talk about today homework. I have agonize to today topic. Umm... I think that If I will be famous person or gain many money, my parents will get VIP treatment. And They will proud of me. My parents want that I give many pocket money to them. haha.. But you know, I'm poor. So my parents is feeling disappointed. hahaha...^^::

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[이름]! Good afternoon! Thanks for sharing this to me. Don\'t worry, in the future, you will earn more money than these days. By that time, you can give more money to your parents and you can even travel with them. ^_^ Well, let\'s be positive. Have a great day! ~T. Jessie~ What makes your parents special?Hello Jessie^^ >> Correct!We will join until June. >> We will be together until June. After ended our class, I will request little money to mom. >> After we end our class, I will request a little amount of money from my mom.HaHaHa.. I have to continue work hard. >> HaHaHa.. I have to continue working hard. Because I want to do various things. >> Correct!Umm.. Anyway I hope that I will have beautiful double eyelid. HaHaHa^^>> Correct!hehe... Let\'s talk about today homework. >> Let\'s talk about today\'s homework.I have agonize to today topic. >> Do you mean: I was agonized by today\'s topic.Umm... I think that If I will be famous person or gain many money, my parents will get VIP treatment. >> Umm... I think that if I will be a famous person or if I gain much money, my parents will get VIP treatment. And They will proud of me. >> And they will be proud of me. My parents want that I give many pocket money to them. haha.. >> My parents want me to give them much pocket money. haha..But you know, I\'m poor. >> Correct! So my parents is feeling disappointed. >> So my parents are disappointed. hahaha...^^::

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