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2015-02-10 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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Can a book change the word? If yes, how? If no, why not? Hello Jessie. I always finished our class, I checked about your comment and my error grammar. And then printed and attached in my note. However I just read at one time in the morning. Usually I excused lack of time. But since I saw the documentary " ten thousand million time of principle". I will use spare time. For example waiting bus, walk the road, etc... If I feel not sleep. haha..^^ Anyway I consider book is changed the world. It is very simply. Change is not enormous thing. I know one case what change the world. The famous fantasy novel "Harry potter" is popular with adult and children. They got pleaxure of reading. And Harry potter was made the movie. Resultingly, Harry potter novel was made famous actor, filming site and dream. Novel isn't discrimination. It is power with the world more happy. ^^

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Hello [이름]! I\'m glad to know that you are reading the corrections I gave you. I hope you won\'t make any other excuses. Anyway, thanks for sharing your opinion and ideas about our homework. I had fun reading your composition. We better enjoy this day! See you! ~T. Jessie~ Can a book change the word? If yes, how? If no, why not?Hello Jessie. >> Correct!I always finished our class, I checked about your comment and my error grammar. >> After our class, I always check your comments and my errors.And then printed and attached in my note. >> And then print and attach it in my note.However I just read at one time in the morning. >> Correct!Usually I excused lack of time. >> Usually, my excuse is I lack time.But since I saw the documentary \" ten thousand million time of principle\". >> But since I saw the documentary \" Ten Thousand Million Time of Principle\". I will use spare time. >> I will use my spare time. For example waiting bus, walk the road, etc... >> For example waiting for the bus, walking on the road, etc...If I feel not sleep. haha..^^>> If I don\'t feel sleepy.Anyway I consider book is changed the world. >> Anyway I consider that book can change the world. It is very simply. >> It is very simple. Change is not enormous thing. >> Change is not an enormous thing. I know one case what change the world. >> I know one case that changed the world. The famous fantasy novel \"Harry potter\" is popular with adult and children.>> The famous fantasy novel \"Harry potter\" is popular to  adults and children. They got pleaxure of reading. >> They got pleasure from reading. And Harry potter was made the movie. >> And they made a Harry Potter movie.Resultingly, Harry potter novel was made famous actor, filming site and dream. >> As a result, the novel made the actor famous, as well as the filming site.Novel isn\'t discrimination. >> Do you mean: Novel isn\'t discriminatory.It is power with the world more happy. ^^ >> It is a power which makes the world happy.

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