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2015-02-13 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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Describe the bast trip you ever took : What made it your best trip? Hello Jessie^^ Again Friday!! yippee. I feel time is very fast. Except in Monday, Tuesday. haha. I feel gratitude for my work. Because my work is permit to wants thing for me. hehe. One of my bucket list is trip. Umm.... My best landscape of trip is Vertigo's nightscape in Thailand. It is already two year ago. I went to Thailand in 2013. But I never forget this place. Vertigo is popular place in Thailand. It is sky tower of Banyan Tree Bangkok hotel. Extensive dark night sky adhered to dark land. I felt that as if l stand above the sky. The land of my underfoot was many high rise building shine fantastical. It seem liked starlit in dark forest.

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Good afternoon! I appreciate your effort in making your composition even if you have a lot of things to do. I am glad that you shared your experience to me. I suddenly felt like I wanted to go there. Maybe someday, I can also go there. Have a great weekend! ~T. Jessie~ Describe the bast trip you ever took : What made it your best trip?Hello Jessie^^ >> Correct!Again Friday!! yippee. >> It\'s Friday again! I feel time is very fast. >> I feel like time is very fast. Except in Monday, Tuesday. haha. >> Except on Mondays and Tuesdays.I feel gratitude for my work. >> I am grateful with my work.Because my work is permit to wants thing for me. hehe. >> Do you mean: Because my work permits me to do the things that I want.One of my bucket list is trip. >> One of my best lists is going on a trip.Umm.... My best landscape of trip is Vertigo\'s nightscape in Thailand. >> Do you mean: The best landscape I saw on my trip is Vertigo\'s nightscape in Thailand.It is already two year ago. >> It is already two years ago.I went to Thailand in 2013. >> Correct!But I never forget this place. >> But I will never forget this place.Vertigo is popular place in Thailand. >> Vertigo is a popular place in Thailand. It is sky tower of Banyan Tree Bangkok hotel. >> It is a sky tower of Banyan Tree Bangkok hotel. Extensive dark night sky adhered to dark land. >>  The extensive dark night sky adhered to the dark land. I felt that as if l stand above the sky. >> I felt as if l stand above the sky. The land of my underfoot was many high rise building shine fantastical. >> Under my feet, there are many high rise buildings which shine fantastically.It seem liked starlit in dark forest. >> It seemed like a starlit in a dark forest.

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