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2015-02-23 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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What do you think is the most important thing to have a happy family? Hello Jessie. I was wait our class for a long fime. haha But I failed talk about the movie "international market" story. It is a young boy story in Korea War. His family lived in North Korea. But they had to leave their house. At this time, young boy lost his father. The other family flee to "international market" in Busan. Young boy worked coal miner in Germany fot his family. And He shipped military stores in Vietnam War. Young boy looks like our father in 1970. The movie is very popular. I think the most important thing to family is money and health. I know the money is not happy. But enough money is necessary condition of happiness. If family don't money, father or mother will be sacrifice for family. And health is essential condition. Every people hope money and health. Because happiness is made.

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Good afternoon [이름]! Thanks for sharing this story. I think it is a very good movie. Don\'t worry, you can tell me about the movies that you have watched tomorrow. ^_^ See you! Take care! ~T. Jessie~ What do you think is the most important thing to have a happy family?Hello Jessie. >> Correct!I was wait our class for a long fime. haha >> I waited for the class for a long time.But I failed talk about the movie \"international market\" story. >> But I failed to talk about the movie,\" International Market.\"It is a young boy story in Korea War. >> It is a story about a young boy in Korean war.His family lived in North Korea. >> Correct!But they had to leave their house. >> Correct!At this time, young boy lost his father. >> At that time, the young boy lost his father.The other family flee to \"international market\" in Busan. >> Do you mean: The other members of his family fled to the \"International market\" in Busan.Young boy worked coal miner in Germany fot his family. >> The young boy worked as a coal miner in Germany for his family.And He shipped military stores in Vietnam War. >> Do you mean: And he shipped military products for the Vietnam war.Young boy looks like our father in 1970. >> The young boy looks like our father in 1970.The movie is very popular. >> Correct!I think the most important thing to family is money and health. >> I think the most important things to a family are money and health.I know the money is not happy. >> Do you mean: I know money can\'t buy happiness.But enough money is necessary condition of happiness. >> But having enough money is necessary to have happiness.If family don\'t money, father or mother will be sacrifice for family. >> If a family doesn\'t have money, the father or mother has to sacrifice for the family. And health is essential condition. >> Health is also an essential condition.Every people hope money and health. >> Every person hopes for money and good health. Because happiness is made. >> Correct!

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