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2015-02-25 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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what kinds of things do you do to improve/maintain your appearance? Hello. Jessie. Today, I feel the day is very fast. Twenty-four hours a day is very short time. Before I usually go to bed, I decide to hard to do everything to tomorrow. But I went my house, I got lazy. I try to get up early in the morning. Because use to free time. I prepare to future, so I read a book, newspaper and study English. I know that I'm normal. Profound change comes slowly. I hope that I receive result of effort on the end of this year. Maybe I will be beautiful, strong and famous. haha But need the time. About ten year? haha.

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Good morning! Thanks for your composition. Wow! That\'s good. You have a goal then. Well, I hope you\'ll attain that goal in ten years. ^_^ Enjoy this day! See you! ~T. Jessie~ what kinds of things do you do to improve/maintain your appearance?>> What kinds of things do you do to improve/maintain your appearance?Hello. Jessie. >>  Correct! OR>> Hello Jessie!Today, I feel the day is very fast. >> Today, I feel that the day is very fast.Twenty-four hours a day is very short time. >> Twenty-four hours a day is a very short time. Before I usually go to bed, I decide to hard to do everything to tomorrow. >> Before I go to bed, I usually decide to do everything tomorrow.But I went my house, I got lazy. >> But when I go to my house, I get lazy.I try to get up early in the morning. >> Correct!Because use to free time. >> Because I have to use my free time.I prepare to future, so I read a book, newspaper and study English. >> I am preparing for the future so I read books, newspaper and study English.I know that I\'m normal. >>  Correct! Profound change comes slowly. >> Correct!I hope that I receive result of effort on the end of this year. >> I hope that I will receive good results Maybe I will be beautiful, strong and famous. haha >> Correct!But need the time. >> But I need time. About ten year? haha. >> Maybe about ten years?

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