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What supernatural beliefs are unique to your culture?
Hello Jessie!
Happy March starts!!
Winter should change spring. I don't like heat.
But I love beautitful flower and luxuriant tree.
Umm... Anyway my country supernatural belief is 신점(Sinjeom)
Sinjeom means saman exorcise exorcism.
Usually Exorcism use min bell, big knife, stick etc.
Sometimes skillful exorcist walk on big knife
They talk about ghostdom. And unfair ghost heard to their story.
Korea government designate to exorcism 'Gim Geumhwa' to intangible cultural asset.
They have to possessed by a god.
It is general god, young boy god..etc.
lf exorcist have a baby, Baby should be exorcist.
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Good afternoon!
Thanks for sharing this.
I think it really is unique in your country.
I wonder how they do it. Well, I am glad that you shared that to me.
See you tomorrow!
~T. Jessie~
What supernatural beliefs are unique to your culture?Hello Jessie!
>> Correct!Happy March starts!!
>> Happy second day of March!Winter should change spring.
>> Do you mean: Winter should be changed to spring.
I don\'t like heat.
>> I don\'t like the heat.
But I love beautitful flower and luxuriant tree.>> But I love beautitful flowers and luxuriant trees.Umm... Anyway my country supernatural belief is 신점(Sinjeom)
>> Umm... Anyway my country\'s supernatural belief is 신점(Sinjeom)Sinjeom means saman exorcise exorcism.
>>Sinjeom means shaman exorcised. Usually Exorcism use min bell, big knife, stick etc.
>> Usually exorcism makes use of a mini bell, a big knife, a stick, etc.Sometimes skillful exorcist walk on big knife
>> Sometimes, a skillful exorcist walks on a big knife.They talk about ghostdom.
>> Correct!
And unfair ghost heard to their story.
>> And the unfair ghost hears their story.Korea government designate to exorcism \'Gim Geumhwa\' to intangible cultural asset.
>> Do you mean: Korea\'s government designated \'Gim Geumhwa\' as an intangible cultural asset.
They have to possessed by a god.
>> They have to be possessed by a god.It is general god, young boy god..etc.
>> It can be a general god, a young boy god, etc.lf exorcist have a baby, Baby should be exorcist.
>> If an exorcist has a baby, his/her baby will also be an exorcist.
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