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2015-03-03 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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Hello Jessie! I took a lunch. So my eyeline is very heavy. I feel tired. Do you have Know-how shake off sleepiness? Umm... I try to moving. 1. Some of the grain appears to be contaminated. 2. Three-quarters of the students are against the tuition hike. 3. Three-quarters of the student body is against the tuition hike. 4. A high percentage of the population is voting for the new school. 5. A high percentage of the people was voting for the new school.

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Good morning! Thanks for answering your homework. You did a good job! Hmm, I think you can stretch and try to keep on moving for you to wake yourself up. Hope you\'ll try it. See you tomorrow! ~T. Jessie~ Hello Jessie! >> Correct!I took a lunch. >> I had lunch. So my eyeline is very heavy. >> So my eyelines are very heavy.I feel tired. >> Correct! Do you have Know-how shake off sleepiness? >> Do you know how to shake off sleepiness?Umm... I try to moving. >> I\'m trying to move.1. Some of the grain appears to be contaminated. >> Correct!2. Three-quarters of the students are against the tuition hike. >> Correct!3. Three-quarters of the student body is against the tuition hike. >> Correct! 4. A high percentage of the population is voting for the new school. >> Correct!5. A high percentage of the people was voting for the new school. >> A high percentage of the people were voting for the new school.

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