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Do you think the invention and rise of computers has been a good thing or a bad thing? Why? Hello Jessie! Why do I feel tired? Every day, I said "sleepiness" hahaha. Why am I queen of sleepiness.. I guess cause of tired. Answer is fat.Strength is in inverse proportion to fat. I remember little food! fighting! Umm... I think computer is not machine. It is important resource. Looks like electricity. Electricity misappropriate to people. But electricity production occur environmental pollution. Computer also is like a electricity. People use computer to send a message, watching the movie, drama, picture, etc. And other area lives people can talk real time. But excessive computer use occur dependence.

Good afternoon [이름]! Yes! You always say  that you\'re sleepy. You should be more positive. ^_^ Thanks for doing your homework. Please check the corrections. ^_^ See you! ~T. Jessie~ Do you think the invention and rise of computers has been a good thing or a bad thing? Why?Hello Jessie! >> Correct!Why do I feel tired? >> Correct! Every day, I said \"sleepiness\" hahaha. >> I always say \"sleepy.\"Why am I queen of sleepiness.. >> Am I the queen of sleep? I guess cause of tired. >> I guess it\'s because I\'m tired.Answer is fat. >> The answer is because of fats. Strength is in inverse proportion to fat. >> Correct!I remember little food! fighting!>> I have to remember to eat a small amount of food! Fighting!Umm... I think computer is not machine. >> I think the computer is not a machine.It is important resource. >> It is an important resource. Looks like electricity. >> It\'s like electricity.Electricity misappropriate to people.>> Do you mean: Electricity is used inappropriately by people.But electricity production occur environmental pollution. >> But electricity production causes environmental pollution.Computer also is like a electricity. >> Computers are also like electricity.People use computer to send a message, watching the movie, drama, picture, etc.  >> People use computers to send a message, watch a movie, drama, picture, etc.And other area lives people can talk real time. >> Do you mean: And people in another area can talk to other people.But excessive computer use occur dependence. >> But excessive computer usage may result to dependence.