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2015-03-06 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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Write about the most shocking news that you've heard. Hello Jessie! Happy Friday!! haha. The weather is more warm. So I expect. Spring is come!! Then I will play badminton.^^ Actually I grumbled because of my tiredness. However If I do not anything in two day or three day. l feel boredom. I will reduce negative thinking and more increase playing. Umm... Recently I read the newspaper. The tittle is "GoRi a nuclear power plant permit running in 2026" I know Korea don't have natural resources. For using electricity,my country develop atomic energy technology. But "GoRi power plant" become superannuated. It was constructed in 1978. I worry about unexpected accident.

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Good afternoon! Thanks so much for sharing this. I\'m happy that you decided to think positively. You better enjoy this weekend! See you on Monday [이름]! ~T. Jessie~ Write about the most shocking news that you\'ve heard.Hello Jessie! >> Correct!Happy Friday!! haha. >> Correct!The weather is more warm. >> The weather is warmer. So I expect. >> So I expect that it will be spring soon. Spring is come!! >> So I expect that it will be spring soon.Then I will play badminton.^^ >> Correct!Actually I grumbled because of my tiredness. >> Correct!However If I do not anything in two day or three day. >> However if I do not do anything in two or three days, I feel bored. l feel boredom. >> I feel bored. >> However if I do not do anything in two or three days, I feel bored. I will reduce negative thinking and more increase playing.>> I will reduce negative thinking and I will just  play.Umm...Recently I read the newspaper. >> Correct!The tittle is \"GoRi a nuclear power plant permit running in 2026\" >> Correct!I know Korea don\'t have natural resources. >> I know that Korea doesn\'t have much natural resources.For using electricity,my country develop atomic energy technology. >> For us to use electricity, my country developed an atomic energy technology.But \"GoRi power plant\" become superannuated. >> Correct! It was constructed in 1978.>> Correct!I worry about unexpected accident. >> I am worried about unexpected accidents.

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