home work
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to go to Australia.
Because my younger sister went to Australia.
She told to me about kangeroos.
I want to see them.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]^^
Thank you for doing your homework. A sentence should have a complete thought.
because my younger sister went to Australia (this is incomplete)
To make it complete, you need to add an independent clause.
I want to go to Australia because my younger sister went to Australia. (this is complete)
Teacher Venus^^
I want to go to Australia. Because my younger sister went to Australia.
>>>I want to go to Australia because my younger sister went to Australia.
She told to me about kangeroos.
>>>She told to me about kangaroos.
I want to see them.
>>>CORRECT
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