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2015-03-12 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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Explain how you'll entertain guests who unexpectedly arrive at your home. Hello Jessie! Wow~ Amazing today! Today, I'don't feel sleep. hahaha I'm not nod off. Feel so good! Is it power of Tteokbokki..?? kiki. Well... I expect to you to visit my house.^^ Korea has very good food service. It is delivery service. haha. If You have a phone, you can give an odor in your home. Waite just fifteen minutes. Then guest will give generous meal. Umm... Personally, I prefer to chines food, jajangmyeon,

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Good afternoon [이름]! Thanks for answering your homework. I really hope I can visit your house someday. ^_^ Anyway, please go over the sentences [이름]. See you tomorrow! ~T. Jessie~ Explain how you\'ll entertain guests who unexpectedly arrive at your home.Hello Jessie! >> Correct!Wow~ Amazing today! >> Wow! What an amazing today! Today, I\'don\'t feel sleep. hahaha >> Today, I don\'t feel sleepy. hahahaI\'m not nod off. >> I did not nod off. Feel so good! >> It feels so good!Is it power of Tteokbokki..?? kiki. >> Is it the power of Tteokbokki..?? kiki. Well... I expect to you to visit my house.^^ >> Well, I expect you to visit my house.^^Korea has very good food service. >> Correct!It is delivery service. >> Correct!haha. If You have a phone, you can give an odor in your home. >> If you have a phone, you can order in your home. Waite just fifteen minutes. >> Wait for just fifteen minutes.Then guest will give generous meal. >> Then the guest will have a generous meal. Umm... Personally, I prefer to chines food, jajangmyeon, >> Umm... Personally, I prefer Chinese food like jajangmyeon.

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