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Hello Jessie.
At first time I felt awkward when I met my boy friend. haha.
But these days I really love him.
Well...But he is sensitive boy. Well.. I'm OK!
I don't want to break up with my boyfriend.
If I get married with my boyfriend in the future.
It is maybe 2020 year.
When I am 31-33 years-old, I will have to abillity.
So I have confidence support to him. ^^
If he stile doesn't has a job, I need to do housework and childbirth. hahaha!!
1. This building have been built recently.
2. I have a great solution to this problem.
3. The class had not started when we reached.
4. It does not matter.
5. Robin’s car was stolen yesterday.
Thank you.^^
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon!
I will attend your wedding then. ^_^ Hahaha
Wow! You are blinded by love. ^__^
Anyway, I respect your choice. Hahaha
See you on Monday [이름]!
Enjoy your weekend!
~T. Jessie~
Hello Jessie.
>> Correct!At first time I felt awkward when I met my boy friend. haha.
>> At first, I felt awkward when I met my boy friend. haha.But these days I really love him.
>> Correct!Well...But he is sensitive boy.
>> But he is a sensitive man.
Well.. I\'m OK!
>> Correct!I don\'t want to break up with my boyfriend.
>> Correct!If I get married with my boyfriend in the future.
>> If I get married with my boyfriend in the future, it might be in 2020.It is maybe 2020 year.
>> If I get married with my boyfriend in the future, it might be in 2020.When I am 31-33 years-old, I will have to abillity.
>> When I will be 31-33 years old, I will have the abillity.So I have confidence support to him. ^^
>> So I should have the confidence to support him. ^^ If he stile doesn\'t has a job, I need to do housework and childbirth. hahaha!!>> If he still doesn\'t have a job, I need to do the housework and childbirth. hahaha!!1. This building have been built recently. >> This building has been built recently.2. I have a great solution to this problem.>> Correct!3. The class had not started when we reached.>> Correct!4. It does not matter.>> Correct!5. Robin’s car was stolen yesterday.>> Correct!Thank you.^^
>> Correct!
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