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2015-03-13 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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Hello Jessie. At first time I felt awkward when I met my boy friend. haha. But these days I really love him. Well...But he is sensitive boy. Well.. I'm OK! I don't want to break up with my boyfriend. If I get married with my boyfriend in the future. It is maybe 2020 year. When I am 31-33 years-old, I will have to abillity. So I have confidence support to him. ^^ If he stile doesn't has a job, I need to do housework and childbirth. hahaha!! 1. This building have been built recently. 2. I have a great solution to this problem. 3. The class had not started when we reached. 4. It does not matter. 5. Robin’s car was stolen yesterday. Thank you.^^

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Good afternoon! I will attend your wedding then. ^_^ Hahaha Wow! You are blinded by love. ^__^ Anyway, I respect your choice. Hahaha See you on Monday [이름]! Enjoy your weekend! ~T. Jessie~ Hello Jessie. >> Correct!At first time I felt awkward when I met my boy friend. haha. >> At first, I felt awkward when I met my boy friend. haha.But these days I really love him. >> Correct!Well...But he is sensitive boy. >> But he is a sensitive man. Well.. I\'m OK! >> Correct!I don\'t want to break up with my boyfriend. >> Correct!If I get married with my boyfriend in the future. >> If I get married with my boyfriend in the future, it might be in 2020.It is maybe 2020 year. >> If I get married with my boyfriend in the future, it might be in 2020.When I am 31-33 years-old, I will have to abillity. >> When I will be 31-33 years old, I will have the abillity.So I have confidence support to him. ^^ >> So I should have the confidence to support  him. ^^ If he stile doesn\'t has a job, I need to do housework and childbirth. hahaha!!>> If he still doesn\'t have a job, I need to do the housework and childbirth. hahaha!!1. This building have been built recently. >> This building has been built recently.2. I have a great solution to this problem.>> Correct!3. The class had not started when we reached.>> Correct!4. It does not matter.>> Correct!5. Robin’s car was stolen yesterday.>> Correct!Thank you.^^ >> Correct!  

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