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2015-03-16 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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Hi Jeny^^ Thank you for teaching me for a week. I want to continue studying English with you. And I also want to approve my English skill Is it possible? ^^ -------------------------- 1. Maria worked very hard. So she got the first prize. 2. Shyam was promoted. Because he was very hard working. 3. Mira was tired. Because she had been working for a long time. 4. He did not get the job. Because he lacked the qualifications. 5. When the teacher entered the classroom, the students got up.

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Hello [이름], Thank you for you homework. I guess you have to review the corrections that I have made. You need to combine the sentences. I know that you do have the capabilities in improving your skills in English. Just keep on learning!!!Small learning develops into massive learning over time. If you consciously learn new things, you can find yourself speaking the language well. Just continue gaining knowledge from our day to day activities. T. Jeny   Hi Jeny^^ >>correctThank you for teaching me for a week.>>correct I want to continue studying English with you. >>correctAnd I also want to approve my English skill >>And I also want to improve my English skills.Is it possible? ^^ >>correct--------------------------1. Maria worked very hard. So she got the first prize. >> Maria worked very hard so she got the first prize.2. Shyam was promoted. Because he was very hard working. >>Shyam was promoted because he was very hard working.3. Mira was tired. Because she had been working for a long time. >>Mira was tired because she had been working for a long time.4. He did not get the job. Because he lacked the qualifications. >>He did not get the job because he lacked the qualifications.5. When the teacher entered the classroom, the students got up. >>correct 

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