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Who is the most intelligent person you know? Describe the person and write why you think he/ she is intelligent. Hello Jessie! I am really delighted to learn English with you.^^ I agree that I have blind love. HaHaHa!! In the old days, I consider that man have to considered job. Beacause many Korea people evaluate value of other people from position of husband or wife. If your husband is doctor, people treat doctor wife. So especially men have a pressure. I agree that It is no such thing as a high or low job. Naturally, there is people what a great achievement. But they are not intelligent. I think that they are really love their job, work, study etc. Typical case is famous sportswoman Yun-A Kim. She is started ice-skating when she is very young. First time, She is not special. But she love it, So She practice about 100,000 hours. Sometimes I complained "Why am I not smart?" But these days I realize constant effort is very important every thing. Thank you^^

[이름]! Good morning! Thanks for sharing this wonderful composition. Indeed! Effort is much needed in everything we do. So as long as you have the passion, goal and effort, you can be successful. Well, we better enjoy this day! See you later! ~T. Jessie~ Who is the most intelligent person you know? Describe the person and write why you think he/ she is intelligent.Hello Jessie! >> Correct!I am really delighted to learn English with you.^^ >> Correct!I agree that I have blind love. HaHaHa!! >> Correct!In the old days, I consider that man have to considered job. >> Before, I consider that men has to consider their jobs.Beacause many Korea people evaluate value of other people from position of husband or wife. >> Because many Koreans evaluate the value of people from the position of the husband or wife.If your husband is doctor, people treat doctor wife. >> If your husband is a doctor, people will treat you well. So especially men have a pressure. >> So men are especially pressured.I agree that It is no such thing as a high or low job. >> I agree that there is no such thing as high or low job.Naturally, there is people what a great achievement. >> Naturally, there are people who have great achievements.But they are not intelligent. >> Correct!I think that they are really love their job, work, study etc. >> I think that they really love their job, work, study etc.Typical case is famous sportswoman Yun-A Kim. >> A typical case is the famous sportswoman Yun-A Kim.She is started ice-skating when she is very young. >> She started ice-skating when she was very young.First time, She is not special. >> At first, she was not special. But she love it, So She practice about 100,000 hours. >> But she loves it so she practiced for about 100,000 hours.Sometimes I complained \"Why am I not smart?\" >> Correct! >> Sometimes, I complained, \"Why am I not smart?\"But these days I realize constant effort is very important every thing. >> But these days I realize that constant effort is very important in everything. Thank you^^ >> Correct!