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Write about your "favorite place."
Hello Jessie.
I feel better than morning.
I send the message to write teacher.
My message was playfulness.
I will be happy virus.
Bad things not occur worry. The problem happen to unsuspected thing.
So.. As possible as I wii improve more energy.
When I often feel a sense of futility, I hope deep sleep during 3days.
hahaha. Today, I'm little sensitive girl.
When I had stress and stuffy, I went the Suwon Hwaseong Fortress.
It is designated as a UNESCO World Heritage.
Suwon Hwaseong Fortress is rampart.
It is famous tourist attraction.
It is one and half hours distance.
It was made Jeongjo of Joseon King.
Rampart is around small village and mountain in Suwan City.
I like this place. Will you join us? ^^
강사 첨삭
Good morning!
Thanks for sharing about this place.
I hope you\'ll bring me there someday. ^_^
Anyway, enjoy this day!
Be happy and smile always!
~T. Jessie~
Write about your \"favorite place.\"Hello Jessie.
>> Correct!I feel better than morning.
>> I feel better now than in the morning.I send the message to write teacher.
>> I sent a message to my writing teacher.My message was playfulness.
>> Do you mean: My message was a joke.
I will be happy virus.
>> I will be a \"happy virus.\"Bad things not occur worry.
>> Do you mean: Bad things occured so we are worried.
The problem happen to unsuspected thing.>> The problem happened unsuspectedly.
So.. As possible as I wii improve more energy.
>> So, as possible as I can, I will have more energy.
OR>> So, I will be energetic as possible as I can.When I often feel a sense of futility, I hope deep sleep during 3days.
>> When I often feel a sense of futility, I always hope to have a deep sleep for 3 days.hahaha. Today, I\'m little sensitive girl.
>> Today, I\'m a little sensitive girl.When I had stress and stuffy, I went the Suwon Hwaseong Fortress.
>> When I am stressed and stuffy, I go to the Suwon Hwaseong Fortress.It is designated as a UNESCO World Heritage.
>> Correct!Suwon Hwaseong Fortress is rampart.
>> Suwon Hwaseong Fortress is a rampart. It is famous tourist attraction.
>> It is a famous tourist attraction. It is one and half hours distance.
>> It is one and half hours from our area. It was made Jeongjo of Joseon King.
>> It was made by Jeongjo of Joseon Dynasty. Rampart is around small village and mountain in Suwan City.
>> The rampart is around the small village and mountain in Suwan City.I like this place.
>> Correct!
Will you join us? ^^
>> Correct!
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