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학생이 쓴 원문
Hello Jessie!
Thanks your comment.^^
Theses days Korea weather is ideal picnic.
So I will go picnic near by my house.
Usually I relieve stress or concern of ungrounded for running.
Keep running. haha
Be happy and smile!!
1. Her name is Susan.
2. She goes to FIS
3. She comes erom Canada.
4. Her brother is seventh in grade
5. She is 11 years old.
6. Her father works in a bank.
7. She likes playing tennis.
8. Her first language is French.
9. She has black hair and green eyes.
10.She comes to school by bus.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon [이름]!
I hope you\'ve had your lunch. ^_^
Well, you did a very good job in answering your homework.
You just have to be more careful. ^_^
See you tomorrow!
~T. Jessie~
Hello Jessie!
>> Correct!Thanks your comment.^^
>> Thanks for your comment.^^Theses days Korea weather is ideal picnic.
>> These days, Korea\'s weather is ideal for picnic.So I will go picnic near by my house.
>> So I will go on a picnic nearby my house.Usually I relieve stress or concern of ungrounded for running.
>> Do you mean: Usually, I relieve my stress or concerns by running.Keep running. haha
>> Correct!Be happy and smile!! >> Correct!1. Her name is Susan.
>> Correct!2. She goes to FIS
>> She goes to FIS.
>> Be careful with the punctuation. That is very important.3. She comes erom Canada.
>> Correct!
>> She comes from Canada.4. Her brother is seventh in grade
>> Her brother is in the seventh grade.5. She is 11 years old.
>> Correct!6. Her father works in a bank.
>> Correct!7. She likes playing tennis.
>> Correct!8. Her first language is French.
>> Correct!9. She has black hair and green eyes.
>> Correct!10.She comes to school by bus.
>> Correct!
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