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Write about one of your fondest childhood memories.
Hello Jessie.
"Do you feel me?" It's very fun.
Very interesting!
It already tomorrow is happy Friday.
I'm very happy but I feel weekend is very short. haha.
I will have free of 48 hours.
These day, weather is sunshine! Wow!
I gain powerful and positive feeling.
Sometimes my boyfriend call me by nickname "Daughter of sun"
Anyway, I don't remember in everything my baby days.
But I often saw the my childhood picture.
One of picture, I was hugged for my father.
I am binovular twinst.
So my brother and I have same age. hehe.
Accordingly we were preemie.
This is picture when I leaved the hospital.
At that times, my weight is about 2.5kg.
Now days, many premature baby can be cured high success rate.
But in those days, It was high death rate of preemie.
I had big luck.
Now father hands size baby is very heavy and health.
HaHa.. I'm lucky girl.
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I\'m happy that you are interested. ^_^
Indeed! The weekend is very fast. ^_^
Anyway, thanks for sharing that. I always forget that you have a twin brother.
You rarely talk about him. ^_^
Well, let\'s talk again tomorrow!
See you!
~T. Jessie~
Write about one of your fondest childhood memories.Hello Jessie.
>> Correct!\"Do you feel me?\" >> Correct!
It\'s very fun.
>> Correct!Very interesting!
>> Correct!It already tomorrow is happy Friday.
>> It is already a happy Friday tomorrow.I\'m very happy but I feel weekend is very short. haha.
>> I\'m very happy but I feel that the weekend is very short. haha. I will have free of 48 hours.
>> I will have 48 hours free time.These day, weather is sunshine! Wow!
>> These days, the weather is sunny! Wow!I gain powerful and positive feeling.
>> I am gaining power and positive feeling.Sometimes my boyfriend call me by nickname \"Daughter of sun\">> Sometimes my boyfriend calls me by my nickname \"The daughter of the sun\"Anyway, I don\'t remember in everything my baby days.
>> Anyway, I don\'t remember everything about my baby days.But I often saw the my childhood picture.
>> But I often saw my childhood picture.One of picture, I was hugged for my father.
>> In one of the pictures, I was hugged by my father. I am binovular twinst.
>> My brother and I are binovular twins.So my brother and I have same age. hehe.
>> Correct!Accordingly we were preemie.
>> Correct!This is picture when I leaved the hospital.
>> There is a picture when I left the hospital.At that times, my weight is about 2.5kg.
>> At that time, my weight was about 2.5kg.Now days, many premature baby can be cured high success rate.
>> Nowadays, many premature babies have higher survival rate.But in those days, It was high death rate of preemie.
>> But in those days, the death rate for preemies were high.
I had big luck.
>> I was lucky.Now father hands size baby is very heavy and health.
>> Do you mean: Now, even if the size of the baby is like his father\'s hand, he/she is still heavy and healthy.
HaHa.. I\'m lucky girl.
>> HaHa.. I\'m a lucky girl.
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