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Is it more important to do work that one finds fulfilling or work that pays well?
Hello Jessie.
Finally, it's a Friday!
Every weekend I decided to do the study English or write story.
But When I saw the drama or met my boy friend, I forget to this.
For a such reason, I am unsuccessful in a diet plan. haha.
I know why l fail in the diet.
I have enormous appetite. haha
Umm...Aha! On Saturday, my grand-father is birth day.
So every family will go the country side.
And we will have a party. haha.
But I will be little regrettable. Because I will don't meet my boyfriend.
My weekend schedule is full.
I think that goal of work and money are very important.
Many people renounces one of the two.
Practically We choose between money and our's goal.
I consider that office work is profitable sideline.
And writing is my day job.
I am still writer.
But that's OK! Fighting. HaHa..
I 'm lazy girl, but I hopes that some days I will be really writer.^^
Happy a good weekend!
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon!
Thanks for sharing this.
Happy birthday to your grandfather!
You better enjoy the party and tell me about it on Monday.
See you!
~T. Jessie~
Is it more important to do work that one finds fulfilling or work that pays well?Hello Jessie.
>> Correct!Finally, it\'s a Friday!
>> Finally, it\'s Friday!Every weekend I decided to do the study English or write story.
>> Every weekend, I decided to study English or write a story.But When I saw the drama or met my boy friend, I forget to this.
>> But when I see a drama or meet my boy friend, I forget to do this. For a such reason, I am unsuccessful in a diet plan. haha.
>> For such reason, I am unsuccessful in my plan to go on a diet. haha.I know why l fail in the diet.
>> I know why l failed.
I have enormous appetite. haha
>> Correct!Umm...Aha! On Saturday, my grand-father is birth day.
>> Umm...Aha! On Saturday, it is my grandfather\'s birthday.So every family will go the country side.
>> So every family member will go to the country side.
OR>> So all of us will go to the country side.And we will have a party. haha.
>> Correct!But I will be little regrettable.
>> But I feel a little regret.
Because I will don\'t meet my boyfriend.
>> Because I won\'t be meeting my boyfriend.My weekend schedule is full.
>> Correct!I think that goal of work and money are very important.
>> I think that setting a goal for work and money is very important.
Many people renounces one of the two.
>> Many people renounce one of the two.Practically We choose between money and our\'s goal.
>> Practically, we choose between money and our goals. I consider that office work is profitable sideline.
>> I consider that office work is a profitable sideline.And writing is my day job.
>> Correct!I am still writer.
>> I am still a writer.But that\'s OK! Fighting. HaHa..
>> Correct!I \'m lazy girl, but I hopes that some days I will be really writer.^^
>> I\'m a lazy girl, but I hope that someday I will be a real writer.^^Happy a good weekend!
>> Have a good weekend!
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