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2015-03-20 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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Is it more important to do work that one finds fulfilling or work that pays well? Hello Jessie. Finally, it's a Friday! Every weekend I decided to do the study English or write story. But When I saw the drama or met my boy friend, I forget to this. For a such reason, I am unsuccessful in a diet plan. haha. I know why l fail in the diet. I have enormous appetite. haha Umm...Aha! On Saturday, my grand-father is birth day. So every family will go the country side. And we will have a party. haha. But I will be little regrettable. Because I will don't meet my boyfriend. My weekend schedule is full. I think that goal of work and money are very important. Many people renounces one of the two. Practically We choose between money and our's goal. I consider that office work is profitable sideline. And writing is my day job. I am still writer. But that's OK! Fighting. HaHa.. I 'm lazy girl, but I hopes that some days I will be really writer.^^ Happy a good weekend!

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Good afternoon! Thanks for sharing this. Happy birthday to your grandfather! You better enjoy the party and tell me about it on Monday. See you! ~T. Jessie~ Is it more important to do work that one finds fulfilling or work that pays well?Hello Jessie. >> Correct!Finally, it\'s a Friday! >> Finally, it\'s Friday!Every weekend I decided to do the study English or write story. >> Every weekend, I decided to  study English or write a story.But When I saw the drama or met my boy friend, I forget to this. >> But when I see a drama or meet my boy friend, I forget to do this. For a such reason, I am unsuccessful in a diet plan. haha. >> For such reason, I am unsuccessful in my plan to go on a diet. haha.I know why l fail in the diet. >> I know why l failed. I have enormous appetite. haha >> Correct!Umm...Aha! On Saturday, my grand-father is birth day. >> Umm...Aha! On Saturday, it is my grandfather\'s birthday.So every family will go the country side. >> So every family member will go to the country side. OR>> So all of us will go to the country side.And we will have a party. haha. >> Correct!But I will be little regrettable. >> But I feel a little regret.  Because I will don\'t meet my boyfriend. >> Because I won\'t be meeting my boyfriend.My weekend schedule is full. >> Correct!I think that goal of work and money are very important. >> I think that setting a goal for work and money is very important. Many people renounces one of the two. >> Many people renounce one of the two.Practically We choose between money and our\'s goal. >> Practically, we choose between money and our goals. I consider that office work is profitable sideline. >> I consider that office work is a profitable sideline.And writing is my day job. >> Correct!I am still writer. >> I am still a writer.But that\'s OK! Fighting. HaHa.. >> Correct!I \'m lazy girl, but I hopes that some days I will be really writer.^^ >> I\'m a lazy girl, but I hope that someday I will be a real writer.^^Happy a good weekend! >> Have a good weekend!

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