Home Work
학생이 쓴 원문
Today is Monday. I'm tired but happy.
Becase I have a work. Many young people is no work.
Well... Two or three don't have a work in our family member.
So their parents and our parents have a pressure.
I also have press in the anxious future.
But Fighting. HAHAHA
Let's start Homework.
Existing text.
:the name of this scool is FIS There are more than one
tousand students hear from all over The werld. meny students
dont no english so thay have esl lessens?
do you like you're new school.
Change the text.
: The name of this school is FIS. There are more than one
thousand students hear from all over The world. Many students
don't know English. So they have ESL lessens.
Do you like you're new school?
강사 첨삭
Good morning!
Thanks for doing your homework. ^_^
I think you did have a good time meeting your relatives.
Well, maybe you can tell me about it later. ^_^
See you!
~T. Jessie~
Today is Monday.
>> Correct!
I\'m tired but happy.
>> Correct!Becase I have a work.
>> Because I have a job.
Many young people is no work.
>> Many young people have no work.Well... Two or three don\'t have a work in our family member.
>> Well, two or three members in my family don\'t have job.So their parents and our parents have a pressure.
>> So their parents and our parents are pressured.I also have press in the anxious future.
>> I am also anxious of the future.But Fighting. HAHAHA
>> But \"fighting!\"
OR>> But I can do this.Let\'s start Homework.>> Let\'s start our homework.Existing text.
>> Existing text: :the name of this scool is FIS There are more than onetousand students hear from all over The werld. meny studentsdont no english so thay have esl lessens?do you like you\'re new school.Change the text.
>> Changed text:: The name of this school is FIS.
>> Correct!
There are more than one thousand students hear from all over The world.
>> There are more than one thousand students here from all over the world.
Many students don\'t know English.
>> Correct!
>> Many students don\'t know English so they have ESL lessons.
So they have ESL lessens.
>> Many students don\'t know English so they have ESL lessons. Do you like you\'re new school?
>> Do you like your new school?
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