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2015-03-26 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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What is the biggest issue in your country nowadays? Hello Jessie. I'm very happy with you. You are good teacher and friend. Though I don't meet you. I feel that our friendship is very closely. haha Maybe, you are popular teacher for students, Isn't it? Well... And yesterday, I did my homework while I sleep. So composition was messy. haha Anyway I talk about today homework. Nowadays Korea has many big issue. There is big camping tent fire, a road broken, etc. Korea government promise nation's safely. But It still increase anxiety. One ot the biggest issue is low deposit interest rate. Korea economy is depressed for a long time. Recently the Bank of Korea formalized about 1% deposit interest rate. Saving grow down. But loan increase. So people are getting loan. I think that people and I worry an economic crisis.

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Good afternoon! I\'m happy to hear this. You are a very good friend and student too [이름]. ^_^ I\'m glad I met you. Hahaha. Wow! Sleeping while writing. You\'re one of a kind. Anyway, thanks for sharing your opinion about the biggest issue in your country. See you tomorrow! ~T. Jessie~ What is the biggest issue in your country nowadays?Hello Jessie. >> Correct!I\'m very happy with you. >> Correct!You are good teacher and friend. >> You are a good teacher and friend.Though I don\'t meet you. >> Though I haven\'t meet you yet. I feel that our friendship is very closely. haha >> I feel that our friendship is very close. OR>> I feel that we are very close. Maybe, you are popular teacher for students, Isn\'t it? >> Maybe, you are a popular teacher to the students, aren\'t you? Well... And yesterday, I did my homework while I sleep. >> Well yesterday, I did my homework while I was asleep.So composition was messy. haha >> So the composition was a bit messy. haha Anyway I talk about today homework. >> Anyway I will talk about today\'s homework. Nowadays Korea has many big issue. >> Nowadays, Korea has many big issues.There is big camping tent fire, a road broken, etc. >> There are big camping tent fire, a broken road, etc.Korea government promise nation\'s safely. >> Korea\'s government promised to improve the nation\'s safety. But It still increase anxiety. >> But it still increases anxiety.One ot the biggest issue is low deposit interest rate. >> One of the biggest issues is low deposit interest rate.Korea economy is depressed for a long time. >> Korea\'s economy is in depression for a long time.Recently the Bank of Korea formalized about 1% deposit interest rate. >> Correct!Saving grow down. >> Saving went down. But loan increase. >> But loans increased.So people are getting loan. >> So people are applying for loans. I think that people and I worry an economic crisis. >> I think that the other people and I worry about economic crisis.

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