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What is the biggest issue in your country nowadays?
Hello Jessie.
I'm very happy with you.
You are good teacher and friend.
Though I don't meet you. I feel that our friendship is very closely. haha
Maybe, you are popular teacher for students, Isn't it?
Well... And yesterday, I did my homework while I sleep.
So composition was messy. haha
Anyway I talk about today homework.
Nowadays Korea has many big issue.
There is big camping tent fire, a road broken, etc.
Korea government promise nation's safely.
But It still increase anxiety.
One ot the biggest issue is low deposit interest rate.
Korea economy is depressed for a long time.
Recently the Bank of Korea formalized about 1% deposit interest rate.
Saving grow down. But loan increase.
So people are getting loan.
I think that people and I worry an economic crisis.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon!
I\'m happy to hear this.
You are a very good friend and student too [이름]. ^_^ I\'m glad I met you.
Hahaha. Wow! Sleeping while writing. You\'re one of a kind.
Anyway, thanks for sharing your opinion about the biggest issue in your country.
See you tomorrow!
~T. Jessie~
What is the biggest issue in your country nowadays?Hello Jessie.
>> Correct!I\'m very happy with you.
>> Correct!You are good teacher and friend.
>> You are a good teacher and friend.Though I don\'t meet you.
>> Though I haven\'t meet you yet.
I feel that our friendship is very closely. haha
>> I feel that our friendship is very close.
OR>> I feel that we are very close.
Maybe, you are popular teacher for students, Isn\'t it?
>> Maybe, you are a popular teacher to the students, aren\'t you?
Well... And yesterday, I did my homework while I sleep.
>> Well yesterday, I did my homework while I was asleep.So composition was messy. haha >> So the composition was a bit messy. haha Anyway I talk about today homework.
>> Anyway I will talk about today\'s homework. Nowadays Korea has many big issue.
>> Nowadays, Korea has many big issues.There is big camping tent fire, a road broken, etc.
>> There are big camping tent fire, a broken road, etc.Korea government promise nation\'s safely.
>> Korea\'s government promised to improve the nation\'s safety. But It still increase anxiety.
>> But it still increases anxiety.One ot the biggest issue is low deposit interest rate.
>> One of the biggest issues is low deposit interest rate.Korea economy is depressed for a long time.
>> Korea\'s economy is in depression for a long time.Recently the Bank of Korea formalized about 1% deposit interest rate.
>> Correct!Saving grow down.
>> Saving went down.
But loan increase.
>> But loans increased.So people are getting loan.
>> So people are applying for loans. I think that people and I worry an economic crisis.
>> I think that the other people and I worry about economic crisis.
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