home work
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I lived in rural community when I was kid.
But I don't know how to farm.
Because my family was poverty.
I am farming in my field every weekend.
It difficult to plant seed and water them.
That work is the most challenging of my life.
My jobs are housewife and farmer.
I saw germinant seeds last weekend.
It was amazing.
Farm work is challenging and rewarding.
강사 첨삭
Hello Clover! This was a pretty good composition! You were able to give good examples based on your own experience. I\'m so proud of you. You are constantly improving. Keep it up!
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
I lived in a rural community when I was kid.
>> CORRECT! But I don\'t know how to farm.
>> CORRECT! Because my family was poverty.
>> CORRECT!
>> poverty = poorI am farming in my field every weekend.
>> CORRECT! It is difficult to plant seed and water them.
>> CORRECT! That work is the most challenging of my life.
>> CORRECT!
>> of = inMy jobs are housewife and farmer.
>> I\'m a housewife and a farmer.
I saw germinant seeds last weekend.
>> CORRECT! It was amazing.
>> CORRECT! Farm work is challenging and rewarding.
>> CORRECT!
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