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2015-03-30 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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I lived in rural community when I was kid. But I don't know how to farm. Because my family was poverty. I am farming in my field every weekend. It difficult to plant seed and water them. That work is the most challenging of my life. My jobs are housewife and farmer. I saw germinant seeds last weekend. It was amazing. Farm work is challenging and rewarding.

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Hello Clover! This was a pretty good composition! You were able to give good examples based on your own experience. I\'m so proud of you. You are constantly improving. Keep it up! Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ I lived in a rural community when I was kid. >> CORRECT! But I don\'t know how to farm. >> CORRECT! Because my family was poverty. >> CORRECT! >> poverty = poorI am farming in my field every weekend. >> CORRECT! It is difficult to plant seed and water them. >> CORRECT! That work is the most challenging of my life. >> CORRECT! >> of = inMy jobs are housewife and farmer. >> I\'m a housewife and a farmer. I saw germinant seeds last weekend. >> CORRECT! It was amazing. >> CORRECT! Farm work is challenging and rewarding. >> CORRECT!

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