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2015-03-30 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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1. As soon as I got home after a long day. I hit the sack right away. 2. I did not mean it, in the heat of the moment. 3. Why don't you apolosize each other. Because it takes two to tango. I listened to Engilsh pop song. < Lionel Richie- Hello > I've been alone with you inside my mind. And in my dreams I've kissed your lips a thousand times. I sometimes see you pass outside my door. Hello, is it me you're looking for? I can see it in your eyes. I can see it in your smile. You're all I've ever wanted, my arms are open wide. 'Cause you know just what to say. And you know just what to do. And I want to tell you so much, I love you.

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Hello Clover! Thanks for doing your homework! I hope you won\'t forget these idioms. Try to use them in our future conversations. I love that song by Lionel Richie! It\'s such a relaxing love song, right? Thank you for sharing! Have a great day!  Please check my corrections below. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ 1. As soon as I got home after a long day. >> CORRECT! I hit the sack right away. >> CORRECT! 2. I did not mean it, in the heat of the moment. >> I did not mean what I said in the heat of the moment. 3. Why don\'t you apolosize each other. >> Why don\'t you apologize to each other? Because it takes two to tango. >> CORRECT! I listened to Engilsh pop song. >> I listened to an English pop song. < Lionel Richie- Hello > >> CORRECT! I\'ve been alone with you inside my mind. >> CORRECT! And in my dreams I\'ve kissed your lips a thousand times. >> CORRECT! I sometimes see you pass outside my door. >> CORRECT! Hello, is it me you\'re looking for? >> CORRECT! I can see it in your eyes. >> CORRECT! I can see it in your smile. >> CORRECT! You\'re all I\'ve ever wanted, my arms are open wide. >> CORRECT! \'Cause you know just what to say. >> CORRECT! And you know just what to do. >> CORRECT! And I want to tell you so much, I love you. >> CORRECT!

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