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2015-03-30 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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Hello Jessie. Thanks for your teaching. Last weekend, I had free time for a long time. These days I feel that I'm really live. First reason, I am using ruitful 24hours And weather is sunny. I hoe that sometimes I will go to abord in the futhre. HaHa, Anyway If I have a son or a daughter, I talk about life style. First, close musical the instrument. I think that music is essential of life. We are affair many stress. Almost stress is easy problem. But the little problem is often grave. Then the instrument can help relieve stress. Second,, Think before get angry. Relationship is most impornant in life. We are Friend, family and sweetheart of somebody. Thrid, Know afraid of money. Money give many thing. So We consider that money is purpose of life. Values of people don't judge wealth.

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Good afternoon! Thanks for doing your homework. I am happy that you had a great time. Anyway, I am not quite sure if I understand your sentences correctly. Please go over it. See you tomorrow! ~T. Jessie~ Hello Jessie. >> Correct!Thanks for your teaching. >> Thanks for  teaching me.Last weekend, I had free time for a long time. >> Last weekend, I had a long free time. These days I feel that I\'m really live. >> On these kinds of days, I feel that I\'m really alive.First reason, I am using ruitful 24hours And weather is sunny. >> The first reason is I am using my 24 hours fruitfully when the weather is sunny.I hoe that sometimes I will go to abord in the futhre. >> I hope to go abroad in the future.HaHa, Anyway If I have a son or a daughter, I talk about life style. >> Anyway, if I have a son or a daughter, I will talk about lifestyle. First, close musical the instrument. >> First is they must be close to musical instruments.I think that music is essential of life. >> Correct! We are affair many stress. >> Do you mean: We will be free from stress. Almost stress is easy problem. >> Do you mean: Stress is a very big problem. >> Do you mean: We can easily get stressed. But the little problem is often grave. >> But if we have little problem then, it is often grave.Then the instrument can help relieve stress. >> Correct!Second,, Think before get angry. >> Second, think before getting angry. Relationship is most impornant in life. >> Relationship is very important in life. We are Friend, family and sweetheart of somebody.>> We are a friend, family and a sweetheart to somebody.Thrid, Know afraid of money. >> Do you mean: Third, don\'t be afraid of money.Money give many thing. >> Money gives many things. So We consider that money is purpose of life. >> So we consider that money is the purpose of life.Values of people don\'t judge wealth. >> The value of people is not judged  from wealth. 

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