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Who is the most beautiful person you know? Why is she the most beautiful for you?
Hello Jessie.
I like English. I'll talk to every thing with many peole who use the English.
But I have one problem.
My concentration is very short. haha.
I think that my mom is most beautiful woman.
Because l'm pretty girl. hahaha.
I think that Beautiful person isn't beautiful face and body.
It means that old person is also beautiful.
Usually, my mom do house work, cook for our family.
When she is young girl, she had good skin and health body.
But the present my mom face has wrinkle.
My mom lose youth. At the same time I'm grow and get beauty.
I appreciate that my mom is goddess. ^^
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Good morning!
Thanks for sharing this. I like that attitude.
You should talk to anyone using the English language.
Please go over the sentences beautiful lady!
See you later!
~T. Jessie~
Who is the most beautiful person you know? Why is she the most beautiful for you?Hello Jessie.
>> Correct!I like English.
>> Correct!
I\'ll talk to every thing with many peole who use the English.
>> I\'ll talk about everything with many people who use English.But I have one problem.
>> Correct!My concentration is very short. haha.
>> Correct!I think that my mom is most beautiful woman.
>> I think that my mom is the most beautiful woman.Because l\'m pretty girl. hahaha.
>> Because l\'m a pretty girl. hahaha.I think that Beautiful person isn\'t beautiful face and body.
>> I think that a beautiful person doesn\'t necessarily mean beautiful face and body.It means that old person is also beautiful.
>> It means that an old person is also beautiful. Usually, my mom do house work, cook for our family.
>> Usually, my mom does all the house work, cook for our family. When she is young girl, she had good skin and health body.
>> When she was a young girl, she had good skin and healthy body.But the present my mom face has wrinkle.
>> But at present, my mom\'s face has wrinkles.My mom lose youth.
>> My mom is not a youth anymore.
At the same time I\'m grow and get beauty.
>> At the same time, I am growing and I\'m becoming more beautiful. I appreciate that my mom is goddess. ^^
>> I appreciate that my mom is a goddess. ^^
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