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Hello Jessie.
I forgot to tell about my boyfriend career.
For a long time, I worry about his job.
Yesterday he told me in his future.
He wants to do study.
He will prepare civil service examination for two to three years.
When I heard, I said "Oh, my God."
Many job applicants wants civil[public] servant.
So it is hard competition.
I trust him. But it is not easy. boohoo
1. If you don't have any other suggestions why don't we eat in the restaurant we saw yesterday?
2. Although the two climbers followed the track to the summit of Mount Everest, the others waited in a base camp.
3. When looking for a good acoustic guitar, there are many things to consider such as _X___ craftsmanship and a wood choice.
4. The teacher asked each of __X__ little students to bring the photograph of their grandparents or elderly relatives.
5. It seems that she has enough talent to become an international singing star but she should be encouraged more.
강사 첨삭
Good morning!
Thanks for sharing this. ^_^
Well, I think you just have to support his decision then even if it will take some time for him to attain that. ^_^
Anyway, please go over the corrections I noted.
See you later!
~T. Jessie~
Hello Jessie.
>> Correct!I forgot to tell about my boyfriend career.
>> I forgot to tell you about my boyfriend\'s career.For a long time, I worry about his job.
>> For a long time, I have been worrying about his job.
Yesterday he told me in his future.
>> Yesterday he told me about his plan for his future.He wants to do study.
>> He wants to study. He will prepare civil service examination for two to three years.
>> He will prepare for the civil service examination for two to three years.When I heard, I said \"Oh, my God.\"
>> When I heard it, I said \"Oh, my God.\"Many job applicants wants civil[public] servant.
>> Many job applicants want to be a civil [public] servant.So it is hard competition.
>> So it is a hard competition.I trust him. >> Correct!
But it is not easy. boohoo>> Correct!1. If you don\'t have any other suggestions why don\'t we eat in the restaurant we saw yesterday?
>> Correct!2. Although the two climbers followed the track to the summit of Mount Everest, the others waited in a base camp.
>> Although the two climbers followed the track to the summit of Mount Everest, the others waited in the base camp.
3. When looking for a good acoustic guitar, there are many things to consider such as _X___ craftsmanship and a wood choice.
>> When looking for a good acoustic guitar, there are many things to consider such as x craftsmanship and x wood choice.4. The teacher asked each of __X__ little students to bring the photograph of their grandparents or elderly relatives.
>> The teacher asked each of the little students to bring the photograph of their grandparents or elderly relatives.5. It seems that she has enough talent to become an international singing star but she should be encouraged more.
>> Correct!
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