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2015-04-09 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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Hello Jessie! Oh my God. Jessie. I'm swimming in a dream. haha. But I can't sleep. Because other people is working. Good sleep is essential condition of success. Lack of sleep disturb concentration and efficiency. And short sleep arose obesity. I eat something more and more. Well.. Anyway Sleep is very important. 1) This old house HAS no central heating. : main verb 2) Do you HAVE a glass of water? : main 3) I HAVE had this computer for three years. :auxiliary verb 4) She has HAD her dog since 2005. : auxiliary verb 5) Lisa HAS been singing for 10 minutes now. : auxiliary verb 6) My parents HAD fish for dinner. ; main verb 7) Did you HAVE a shower this morning? : main verb 8) Frank HAD played tennis when he was 12. : auxiliary verb 9) Look, the bus is coming. We HAVE to hurry. : auxiliary verb 10) HAS Mrs. [Name] written the essay? : auxiliary verb

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon [이름]! Wake up sleepyhead! I think you should drink coffee so you could stay awake. ^_^ Well, I totally agree that sleep is very much needed for success. ^_^ Anyway, Good job in answering your homework. Keep it up! ~T. Jessie~ Hello Jessie! >> Correct!Oh my God. Jessie. >> Correct!I\'m swimming in a dream. haha. >> Correct!But I can\'t sleep. >> Correct! Because other people is working. >> Because other people are working.Good sleep is essential condition of success. >> Good sleep is an essential condition of success.Lack of sleep disturb concentration and efficiency. >> Lack of sleep disturbs concentration and efficiency.And short sleep arose obesity. >> Correct!I eat something more and more. >> Correct!Well.. Anyway Sleep is very important. >> Well, anyway sleep is very important. 1) This old house HAS no central heating. : main verb >> Correct!2) Do you HAVE a glass of water? : main >> Correct!3) I HAVE had this computer for three years. :auxiliary verb >> Correct!4) She has HAD her dog since 2005. : auxiliary verb >> Main verb 5) Lisa HAS been singing for 10 minutes now. : auxiliary verb >> Correct!6) My parents HAD fish for dinner. ; main verb >> Correct!7) Did you HAVE a shower this morning? : main verb >> Correct!8) Frank HAD played tennis when he was 12. : auxiliary verb >> Correct!9) Look, the bus is coming. We HAVE to hurry. : auxiliary verb >> Main verb 10) HAS Mrs. [Name] written the essay? : auxiliary verb >> Correct!

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