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Hello. Jessie!
Umm... I am unwonted depress on today.
I don't know why am I work.
I'm nt a child. So I know that emotion can't do.
I want to be a happy. But I just feel anxiety.
Usually I have stress about anxiety of the future.
Umm... I need very long free time.
However If I don't have a work, I feel more restlessness,.
I know me. Fighting.
1. She is very ___ terrified spiders.
2. We enjoyed our holiday but we were disappointed in our hotel.
3. I was surprised to the way he behaved.
4. He is very fond in animals.
5. She doesn’t often go out in the night because she’s afraid in the dark.
강사 첨삭
Goor afternoon!
Your voice also sounded sad this morning.
If you let yourself be depressed, you will always be like that so you better do something that will make you happy. ^__^
Meet your friends or boyfriend so you will feel much better.
See you tomorrow!
~T. Jessie~
Hello.
>> Correct!
Jessie!
>> Correct!Umm... I am unwonted depress on today.
>> I am depresses today.I don\'t know why am I work.
>> I don\'t know why I\'m working.I\'m nt a child.
>> I\'m not a child.
So I know that emotion can\'t do.
>> So I know what emotion can do. I want to be a happy.
>> I want to be happy.
But I just feel anxiety.
>> But I just feel anxious. Usually I have stress about anxiety of the future.
>> Usually, I\'m stressed because I\'m anxious of the future.Umm... I need very long free time.
>> Umm... I need a very long free time. However If I don\'t have a work, I feel more restlessness,.
>> However, if I don\'t work, I will become more restless.I know me.
>> I know myself.
Fighting.
>> Correct!1. She is very ___ terrified spiders.
>> She is very terrified of spiders.
>> I\'m so sorry, I put the blank in the wrong place.2. We enjoyed our holiday but we were disappointed in our hotel.
>> We enjoyed our holiday but we were disappointed with our hotel.3. I was surprised to the way he behaved.
>> I was surprised by the way he behaved.4. He is very fond in animals.
>> He is very fond of animals.5. She doesn’t often go out in the night because she’s afraid in the dark.
>> She doesn’t often go out at night because she’s afraid of the dark.
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