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What three countries countries will you never visit? Why?
Hello Jessie.
Thanks for your comment.
I think that city life is very comfortable than countryside life.
I hope to live in countryside .
But in order to do that I will be famous. haha.
I realize that these day I talked about worry continuous income.
So I practice for high goal without plan.
And relieve tension.
That is reason, I want to go trip.
Is today topic afraid to visit country?
Umm.. I don't know what I afraid of country.
Umm..I hate country at war.
For example, They are Iraq,Irak, Israel, Palestine.
Sometimes people think living is more difficult than death.
But that countries are easily killing.
I am supporting the young boy in Mongolia.
His family is poor. But they give help to neighbor.
I want to change kind the other country consciousness.
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Good morning!
Thanks for sharing this to me.
Well, there will really come a time for us to think about those kinds of things.
I think it is natural. For now, you should think about the goals that you want to achieve. ^_^
Anyway, enjoy your day!
See you!
~T. Jessie~
What three countries countries will you never visit? Why?Hello Jessie.
>> Correct!
Thanks for your comment.
>> Correct!I think that city life is very comfortable than countryside life.
>> I think that city life is more comfortable than countryside life.
OR>> I think life in the city is more comfortable than life in the countryside.I hope to live in countryside .
>> I hope to live in the countryside. But in order to do that I will be famous. haha.
>> But in order to do that I should be be famous. haha.I realize that these day I talked about worry continuous income.
>> I realize that these day I often talked about my worries about continuous income.So I practice for high goal without plan.
>> Do you mean: So I try to attain my goals without any plans. And relieve tension. >> And to relieve tension.That is reason, I want to go trip.
>> That is the reason why I want to go on a trip.Is today topic afraid to visit country?
>> Is today\'s topic about the countries that I\'m afraid to visit?Umm.. I don\'t know what I afraid of country.
>> I don\'t know what country am I afraid to visit. Umm..I hate country at war.
>> I hate countries which are on war.For example, They are Iraq,Irak, Israel, Palestine.
>> For example, Iraq, Israel, Palestine.
Sometimes people think living is more difficult than death.
>> Sometimes people think living is more difficult than dying.But that countries are easily killing. >> But killing is very easy in those countries.I am supporting the young boy in Mongolia.
>> I am supporting a young boy in Mongolia.His family is poor.
>> Correct!
But they give help to neighbor.
>> But they help their neighbor.I want to change kind the other country consciousness.
>> Do you mean: I want to change that kind of country\'s consciousness.
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