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It is sometimes said that borrowing money from a friend can harm or damage the friendship.
Do you agree?
Hello Jessie.
As always I feel sleep in morning time.
Last weekend's bad influence is biorhythm to break up.
Monday sickness's side sffect is continuing take in sugar.
Already I eat much chocolate.
Anyway, I consider borrowing money is bad thing in people relationship.
Because If i lend the money for my friend, she is not a "friend" any more.
She is "owe the person". If I need the money, I demand money In every day.
When f ask for help, money is not aid.
Friendship keeping is equal.
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Good afternoon.
Thanks for sharing your opinion. ^_^
Wake up my dear [이름]!
Exercise and stretch for you to wake up. ^-^
See you tomorrow!
~T. Jessie~
It is sometimes said that borrowing money from a friend can harm or damage the friendship.Do you agree?Hello Jessie.
>> Correct!As always I feel sleep in morning time.
>> As always, I feel sleepy in the morning.Last weekend\'s bad influence is biorhythm to break up.
>> Last weekend\'s biorhythm was broken so the effect was bad.Monday sickness\'s side sffect is continuing take in sugar.
>> Do you mean: Because of Monday sickness\'s side effect I continued taking in sugar. Already I eat much chocolate.>> I already ate much chocolate.Anyway, I consider borrowing money is bad thing in people relationship.
>> Anyway, I consider borrowing money as a bad thing in people\'s relationship.Because If i lend the money for my friend, she is not a \"friend\" any more.
>> Because if I lend money to my friend, she is not a \"friend\" any more.
She is \"owe the person\".
>> She owes me.
If I need the money, I demand money In every day.
>> If I need money, I will demand it every day.
When f ask for help, money is not aid. >> When I ask for help, money is not the aid.
Friendship keeping is equal.
>> Do you mean: Friendship is being equal.
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