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2015-04-20 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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It is sometimes said that borrowing money from a friend can harm or damage the friendship. Do you agree? Hello Jessie. As always I feel sleep in morning time. Last weekend's bad influence is biorhythm to break up. Monday sickness's side sffect is continuing take in sugar. Already I eat much chocolate. Anyway, I consider borrowing money is bad thing in people relationship. Because If i lend the money for my friend, she is not a "friend" any more. She is "owe the person". If I need the money, I demand money In every day. When f ask for help, money is not aid. Friendship keeping is equal.

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Good afternoon. Thanks for sharing your opinion. ^_^ Wake up my dear [이름]! Exercise and stretch for you to wake up. ^-^ See you tomorrow! ~T. Jessie~ It is sometimes said that borrowing money from a friend can harm or damage the friendship.Do you agree?Hello Jessie. >> Correct!As always I feel sleep in morning time. >> As always, I feel sleepy in the morning.Last weekend\'s bad influence is biorhythm to break up. >> Last weekend\'s biorhythm was broken so the effect was bad.Monday sickness\'s side sffect is continuing take in sugar. >> Do you mean: Because of Monday sickness\'s side effect I continued taking in sugar. Already I eat much chocolate.>> I already ate much chocolate.Anyway, I consider borrowing money is bad thing in people relationship. >> Anyway, I consider borrowing money as a bad thing in people\'s relationship.Because If i lend the money for my friend, she is not a \"friend\" any more. >> Because if I lend money to my friend, she is not a \"friend\" any more. She is \"owe the person\". >> She owes me. If I need the money, I demand money In every day. >> If I need money, I will demand it every day. When f ask for help, money is not aid. >> When I ask for help, money is not the aid. Friendship keeping is equal. >> Do you mean: Friendship is being equal.

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