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학생이 쓴 원문
Hello Jessie.
Today I really want to go outside.
Weather is already so hot looks like summer.
I don't have to concentrate work.
I'm lazy girl. haha. I am loving it.
1. Rice and beans, my favorite dish reminds me of my native Puerto Rico.
2. There are several reasons why you should reconsider your decision.
3. Four years is a long time to spend away from your friends and family.
4. Politics is sometimes a dirty business.
5. When there is thunderstorms approaching, we are always reminded of the threat of tornadoes.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon [이름]!
Thanks for having the time to do this even if you are lazy.^_^
Well, you did a very good job in answering your homework.
Keep it up!
~T. Jessie~
Hello Jessie.
>> Correct!Today I really want to go outside.
>> Correct!
>> Today, I really want to go outside.Weather is already so hot looks like summer.
>> The weather is already so hot so it feels like summer. I don\'t have to concentrate work.
>> I don\'t have to conventrate on my work.
OR>> I couldn\'t concentrate on my work.I\'m lazy girl. haha.
>> I\'m a lazy girl. haha.
I am loving it. >> Correct!1. Rice and beans, my favorite dish reminds me of my native Puerto Rico.>> Correct!2. There are several reasons why you should reconsider your decision.>> Correct!3. Four years is a long time to spend away from your friends and family.>> Correct!4. Politics is sometimes a dirty business.>> Correct!5. When there is thunderstorms approaching, we are always reminded of the threat of tornadoes.
>> Correct!
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