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2015-05-08 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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Do you think that age difference is important when dating? Why or Why not? Hello Jessie. Usually I agonize today homework topic. Because I feel little tired for my boyfriend. I originally consider man must be older than woman. I think that man is childish than woman. They are very simple thinking, emotional and lack of sympathy. Commonly people said, " Man has three years-old young mental than woman. I agree it. My boyfriend break promise. One-way action is increased. Skin-ship is very problem. Sometimes he has one-sided action. Not yet I talk about it. I feel that I take care of one young boy. I wants real adult man. So I will give training. Umm... Fighting.

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Good afternoon [이름]! Thanks so much for sharing this. Ohh, I really like your perseverance. ^_^ I will be cheering for you. ^_^ Anyway, I\'m always here if you want to talk about anything. Have a great Friday! ~T. Jessie~ Do you think that age difference is important when dating? Why or Why not?Hello Jessie. >> Correct!Usually I agonize today homework topic. >> I usually think about today\'s homework\'s topic.Because I feel little tired for my boyfriend. >> Because I feel a little tired of my boyfriend. I originally consider man must be older than woman. >> I originally consider tha the man must be older than the woman. I think that man is childish than woman. >> I think that men are more childish than women.They are very simple thinking, emotional and lack of sympathy. >>  They think very simply, emotional and they lack symphathy.Commonly people said, \" Man has three years-old young mental than woman. >> Commonly, people said, \" Men think three years younger  than women.\"I agree it. >> I agree with it. My boyfriend break promise. >> My boyfriend broke his promise.One-way action is increased. >> Correct!Skin-ship is very problem. >> Skin-ship is one of the problems. Sometimes he has one-sided action. >> Sometimes, he has one-sided actions.Not yet I talk about it. >> I won\'t talk about it yet.I feel that I take care of one young boy. >> I feel that I am taking care of a young boy.I wants real adult man. >> I want a real grown up man.So I will give training. >> So I will train him. Umm... Fighting. >> Correct!

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