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Do you think that age difference is important when dating? Why or Why not?
Hello Jessie.
Usually I agonize today homework topic.
Because I feel little tired for my boyfriend.
I originally consider man must be older than woman.
I think that man is childish than woman.
They are very simple thinking, emotional and lack of sympathy.
Commonly people said, " Man has three years-old young mental than woman.
I agree it. My boyfriend break promise.
One-way action is increased.
Skin-ship is very problem. Sometimes he has one-sided action.
Not yet I talk about it.
I feel that I take care of one young boy.
I wants real adult man.
So I will give training. Umm... Fighting.
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Good afternoon [이름]!
Thanks so much for sharing this.
Ohh, I really like your perseverance. ^_^
I will be cheering for you. ^_^
Anyway, I\'m always here if you want to talk about anything.
Have a great Friday!
~T. Jessie~
Do you think that age difference is important when dating? Why or Why not?Hello Jessie.
>> Correct!Usually I agonize today homework topic.
>> I usually think about today\'s homework\'s topic.Because I feel little tired for my boyfriend.
>> Because I feel a little tired of my boyfriend. I originally consider man must be older than woman.
>> I originally consider tha the man must be older than the woman.
I think that man is childish than woman.
>> I think that men are more childish than women.They are very simple thinking, emotional and lack of sympathy.
>> They think very simply, emotional and they lack symphathy.Commonly people said, \" Man has three years-old young mental than woman.
>> Commonly, people said, \" Men think three years younger than women.\"I agree it.
>> I agree with it.
My boyfriend break promise.
>> My boyfriend broke his promise.One-way action is increased.
>> Correct!Skin-ship is very problem.
>> Skin-ship is one of the problems.
Sometimes he has one-sided action.
>> Sometimes, he has one-sided actions.Not yet I talk about it.
>> I won\'t talk about it yet.I feel that I take care of one young boy.
>> I feel that I am taking care of a young boy.I wants real adult man.
>> I want a real grown up man.So I will give training.
>> So I will train him.
Umm... Fighting.
>> Correct!
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