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2015-05-11 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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Hello Jessie! I am not convinced answer of homework. I need to have many article example sentence. And I have to sleep. haha. I have serious nap. hahaha. Hi John, I arrived in the USA last Monday. We left X Rome, flew over _X__ Alps and made a quick stop in _the__ London. There we went shopping at __X_ Harrods, visited _X__ Tower and enjoyed a sunny afternoon in _the__ Hyde Park. On the following day we left for _the__ New York. _The__ time on board wasn't boring as there were two films to watch on _X__ monitor. _X__ people on _the_ plane were all _the__ Italian. Before we landed at __X_ JFK airport, we saw _the__ Statue of Liberty, __the_ Ellis Island and _the__ Empire State Building. __X_ hotel I stayed in was on corner of __X_ 42nd Street and _X__ 5th Avenue. I don't like _the__ hotels very much, but I didn't have _X__ time to rent an apartment. Please say hello to Samuel and Mandy. Yours,

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Good afternoon [이름]! I\'m really glad that you still tried even if you are not so confident with your answers. Anyway, please check this website so you can learn more about articles. http://englishpage.com/articles/index.htm Wake up sleepyhead! See you tomorrow! ~T. Jessie~ Hello Jessie! >> Correct!I am not convinced answer of homework. >> I am not confident with my answers.I need to have many article example sentence. >> I need to have many example sentences with articles.And I have to sleep. haha. >> Correct!I have serious nap. hahaha.>> I should take a nap.Hi John,I arrived in the USA last Monday. >> Correct! We left X Rome, flew over _X__ Alps and made a quick stop in _the__ London. >> We left x Rome, flew over the Alps and made a quick stop in x London. There we went shopping at __X_ Harrods, visited _X__ Tower and enjoyed a sunny afternoon in _the__ Hyde Park. >> There we went shopping at x Harrods, visited the Tower and enjoyed a sunny afternoon in x Hyde Park. On the following day we left for _the__ New York. >> On the following day we left for x New York. _The__ time on board wasn\'t boring as there were two films to watch on _X__ monitor. >> The time on board wasn\'t boring as there were two films to watch on the monitor. _X__ people on _the_ plane were all _the__ Italian. >> The people on the plane were all x Italian. Before we landed at __X_ JFK airport, we saw _the__ Statue of Liberty, __the_ Ellis Island and _the__ Empire State Building. >> Before we landed at x JFK airport, we saw the Statue of Liberty, x Ellis Island and the Empire State Building. __X_ hotel I stayed in was on corner of __X_ 42nd Street and _X__ 5th Avenue. >> The hotel I stayed in was on the corner of x 42nd Street and x 5th Avenue. I don\'t like _the__ hotels very much, but I didn\'t have _X__ time to rent an apartment. >> I don\'t like x hotels very much, but I didn\'t have x time to rent an apartment. Please say hello to Samuel and Mandy.Yours,

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