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You have enough money to purchase either a house or a business. Which would you choose to buy? Give specific reasons to explain your choice. Hello Jessie. Thank your comment. Article homepage is very useful. Umm... If i have enough money, I will buy the house, Because I think that house is base of happy. Especially deep sleep is important. Every night when I lap in my bed. I feel happiness. House means warm bed, cute dogs, valuable my room and my family. Also buying the house is very hard thing in Korea. Usually It has 10-15 years. Poor people need house. If i do Business, I will be success or fall. I hate gambling. It is reason of unhappiness.

Good afternoon [이름]! Thanks for sharing your choice and defending it. You did a good job. I am glad that I was able to help you. Anyway, please go over the corrections I noted. See you tomorrow! ~T. Jessie~ You have enough money to purchase either a house or a business. Which would you choose to buy? Give specific reasons to explain your choice.Hello Jessie. >> Correct!Thank your comment. >> Thank you for your comment. Article homepage is very useful. >> The homepage about articles is very useful.Umm... If i have enough money, I will buy the house, Because I think that house is base of happy. >> Umm... If I have enough money, I will buy a house, because I think that a house is the basis of being happy. Especially deep sleep is important. >> Having deep sleep is especially important.Every night when I lap in my bed. >> Every night when I lay on my bed, I feel happy. I feel happiness. >> Every night when I lay on my bed, I feel happy. House means warm bed, cute dogs, valuable my room and my family. >> House means having a warm bed, cute dogs, valuables in my room and my family. Also buying the house is very hard thing in Korea. >> Also, buying a house is a very hard thing in Korea. Usually It has 10-15 years. >> Usually, it takes 10-15 years.Poor people need house. >> Poor people need a house. If i do Business, I will be success or fall. >> If I do business, I might be successful or not. OR>> If I do business, I have to take a lot of risks.I hate gambling. >> Correct! It is reason of unhappiness. >> It is a reason for unhappiness.