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2015-05-18 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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Hello Jessie. I'm really sad. Today I have to late to get off. Because senior ask to name card before Monday. But on weekend many company don't work. I ordered name-card very fast, but product's delivery late to wait until 30-40 minutes. I'm very sad. hoo.. But let's homework. ^^ 1. On Sundays I often stay in bed until 10 o'clock. 2. After John has done his homework, he may play his favorite computer game. 3. We were on our way to Ashville when our car broke down. 4. Before I go to school, I take my little brother to preschool. 5. I'll phone you until I'm there. 6. It's still two days after our son flies back to Chicago. 7. After I finished school, I went to New Zealand. 8. We had left the beach before the rain started. 9. We stayed in our house until the rain stopped. 10.When he heard about the accident he was shocked.

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Good morning! [이름]! I hope you enjoyed your weekend even if you went home late. Well, you did a great job in answering your homework. ^_^ Keep it up! See you! ~T. Jessie~ Hello Jessie. >> Correct!I\'m really sad. >> Correct! Today I have to late to get off. >> Today, I have to get off late.Because senior ask to name card before Monday. >> Because my senior asked me to order name cards before Monday.But on weekend many company don\'t work. >> But on weekends, many companies don\'t work.I ordered name-card very fast, but product\'s delivery late to wait until 30-40 minutes. >> I ordered name-cards very fast, but the product\'s delivery is late so I have to wait for 30-40 minutes.I\'m very sad. hoo.. >> Correct! But let\'s homework. ^^1. On Sundays I often stay in bed until 10 o\'clock.>> Correct!2. After John has done his homework, he may play his favorite computer game. >> Correct!3. We were on our way to Ashville when our car broke down. >> Correct!4. Before I go to school, I take my little brother to preschool. >> Correct!5. I\'ll phone you until I\'m there. >> I\'ll phone you when I\'m there.6. It\'s still two days after our son flies back to Chicago. >> It\'s still two days before our son flies back to Chicago.7. After I finished school, I went to New Zealand. >> Correct!8. We had left the beach before the rain started. >> Correct!9. We stayed in our house until the rain stopped. >> Correct!10.When he heard about the accident he was shocked. >> Correct!

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