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ESSAY: What is a very important skill a person should learn in order to be successful in the world today? Choose one skill and use specific reasons and examples to support your choice. Hello Jessie. I think that successful skill is aid to good person. Umm... Naturally personal effort is very important. But it is base of success. Commonly success need to very long time. Hard thing is industriousness. Studying students need to aid mother. Mother cook delicious food for their child. Students can receive the power. And sport star in the back is great coach. They devote their everything in order to gold medal. If you have person believe your success, you can success.

Good aternoon [이름]! Thanks for sharing your opinion. I corrected your sentences but I\'m not quite sure if I understand them all correctly. Anyway, please go over them. See you tomorrow! ~T. Jessie~ ESSAY: What is a very important skill a person should learn in order to be successful in the world today? Choose one skill and use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.Hello Jessie. >> Correct!I think that successful skill is aid to good person. >> Do you mean: I think being competitive is an aid to a good person.Umm... Naturally personal effort is very important. >> Correct! >> Naturally, personal effort is very important. But it is base of success. >> But it is the basis of success.Commonly success need to very long time. >> Commonly, success needs a very long time. OR>> Commonly, success can be achieved after a very long time.Hard thing is industriousness. >> Being industrious is very hard.Studying students need to aid mother. >> Studying students need to aid their mothers.  Mother cook delicious food for their child. >> Mothers cook delicious food for their children. Students can receive the power. >> Correct!And sport star in the back is great coach. >> The sport star is a great coach.They devote their everything in order to gold medal. >> They devote their everything in order to win a gold medal.If you have person believe your success, you can success. >> If someone believes that you will be successful, you can be.