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2015-05-21 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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ESSAY: What do you think will foreigners like and dislike about living in your town or city? Why? Hello. Jessie. Finally I know word "faithful". Thank your help. I want to go my home. I feel gain weight. Short sleep is attracted my appetite. haha I think that people is one. That means foreigner, just different a birth place. If I leave Korea and I live in France, I consider foreigner to French. Each countries has other culture. So sometimes they will be don't understand our life style. But this is not problems. As time goes by they accept special custom. Each people have character. So we can be live interesting in the world.

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[이름]! Thanks for sharing your opinion about this matter. I appreciate your effort. I hope you can have enough sleep tonight! Enjoy the rest of the day! ~T. Jessie~ ESSAY: What do you think will foreigners like and dislike about living in your town or city? Why?Hello. Jessie. >> Correct! OR>> Hello Jessie!Finally I know word \"faithful\". >> Finally, I know the word  \"faithful\". Thank your help. >> Thanks for  your help.I want to go my home. >> I want to go to my home. I feel gain weight. >> I feel like I gained weight.Short sleep is attracted my appetite. haha>> Little sleep has attracted my appetite. haha OR>> Not having enough sleep boosted my appetite.I think that people is one. >> I think that people are the same. That means foreigner, just different a birth place. >> That means, foreigners just have a different birth place. OR>> That means, foreigners are just born in a different place.If I leave Korea and I live in France, I consider foreigner to French. >> If I will leave Korea and I will live in France, I am considered as a foreigner by French.Each countries has other culture. >> Each country has a different culture.So sometimes they will be don\'t understand our life style. >> So sometimes they won\'t understand our life style. But this is not problems. >> But this is not a problem. As time goes by they accept special custom. >> Correct! Each people have character. >> Each person has a unique character. So we can be live interesting in the world. >> So we can live interestingly in the world.  

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