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2015-05-26 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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If you could ask a famous person one question, what would you ask? Why? Hello. Jessie~ It already start May's last week. It isn't holiday any more until September. But i'm OK. Because holidays is made me lazy. All day is eat something, sleep, one more eat and sleep. hahaha Umm.. anyway If I meet a famous person, I ask to their habit before go to sleep. Because I consider that famous person's day is little different. I want to know their preparation and finish of daily's target. I think famous person has their own habits. A little differences comes a big good result. I can't be their life. But I aid to know-how what achieve success. When I go to sleep, I usually phone call with my boyfriend. Maybe I can't be famous person. hahaha

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[이름]! Thanks for sharing this. Don\'t put yourself down. You can be a famous writer in the future. You just have to keep trying and to be positive. ^_^ You can do that! See you tomorrow! ~T.  Jessie~ If you could ask a famous person one question, what would you ask? Why?Hello. Jessie~ >> Correct! >> Hello Jessie!It already start May\'s last week. >> It\'s already the start of the last week of May.It isn\'t holiday any more until September. >> There isn\'t holiday anymore until September.But i\'m OK. >> But I\'m OK. Because holidays is made me lazy. >> Because holidays make me lazy. All day is eat something, sleep, one more eat and sleep. hahaha>> All day, all I do is eat something, sleep then eat and sleep again.Umm.. anyway If I meet a famous person, I ask to their habit before go to sleep. >> Anyway if I will meet a famous person, I will ask about their habit before they go to sleep.Because I consider that famous person\'s day is little different. >> Because I consider that a famous person\'s day is a little different.I want to know their preparation and finish of daily\'s target. >> I want to know their preparation and how they finish their daily goals.I think famous person has their own habits. >> I think a famous person has her/his own habits. A little differences comes a big good result. >> A little difference comes a big good result. I can\'t be their life. >> I can\'t have their lives.But I aid to know-how what achieve success. >> Do you mean: But I know how to achieve success.When I go to sleep, I usually phone call with my boyfriend. >> When I go to sleep, I usually talk with my boyfriend on the phone.Maybe I can\'t be famous person. hahaha >> Maybe I can\'t be a famous person. hahaha

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